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| Speakfire 2007-05-10 ch 2,  | abuseA great little story. Nice way of making the connection between a mother's love and River's desire to wear the hat. |
| RomanceMe 2006-07-31 ch 2, | abuseAww! Jaynee is so sweet sometimes. Love it! |
| Culf 2006-03-22 ch 2, | abuseAw... So sweet. And do I spot a tiny bit of Rayne? If I squint my eyes? |
| Maladicta 2006-03-10 ch 2, | abuseoh, sniff sniff, i'm all teary now.. sniff. you better write a sequal or some more chapters or something... sniff. it's a goo thing no ones in the lab on a saturday or i'd look pretty silly at the moment... sniff |
| redaly 2006-02-21 ch 2, | abusei love this! you write river really well, and i like the way you have her interact with the crew. hope there's more coming! |