 Lucy 2006-06-21 . chapter 3 Hi!
I've just read your two Van Helsing stories, and I loved them. Now, I'm really looking forward to the 3rd part.
I like your take of Anna and Van Helsing's personalities. Given the time the story happens, the prejudice against women make Jinette and the others' reactions to Anna presence in Rome very likely.
I think that if Anna had not been killed at the end of the movie, your story would be more likely than any 'Anna survive and Gabriel and she live happily ever after' stories.
Since there aren't many good AnnaxGabriel stories around and even less that are really credible, I'm really glad I found your story.
I also would like to know if you'll develop on the symetric scars Gabriel has on his upper back... this looked very promising.
I hope you'll manage to "un-stuck" The Circle 'cause I really really want to read it.
Lucy |