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| Blue-Eyed-Snape 2007-04-27 ch 2, | abusecontinue |
| Evergreen Sceptre 2006-10-27 ch 2, | abusecool story! i like this idea of customizing wands. Did the dealer say that when they are able to make there own he will make a wand for each also? will they go to nockturn alley for some dark arts and possibly ainchent tombs? did Dumbledore leave any contacts for Harry at Egypt? and has Harry thaught about looking into his Family vault for items they could use book weapons etc? |
| bandgsecurtiyaw 2006-06-06 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. |
| bandgsecurtiyaw 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseGreat start. |
| waytoobored 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseWhy would he bring Luna and not Ginny. I can see that for some reason you dont like her but its totally unrealistic that he takes Luna and doesnt take Ginny. You say that he had only 2 conversations with Ginny before dating but he has had less then that with Luna and never dated her. I'll admit that I am a Ginny fan but regardless of that it just doesnt make sense to take Luna with them. |
| darksentinant 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseI just read this fic and it seems good and all but i just isn't my style. If harry is going to go on a journey then he should go on it alone. he needs some self discover thing for him self. besides your not thinking about the other characters family. ron's mum would never let him go for obvious reasons. same thing with hermoine. the two characters have been sheltered there whole life. harry had to take care him self at all times when he was a kid. Naville would never be let go of by his grand mother. this fic isn't my stlye so i wouldn't read it. it just doesn't feel right, no effance. Heck i threw out the HBP book in the middle of the story because for many many reasons. however your other fic Harry Potter, Black Pheonix is good. |
| Exiled Rain 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI think this might end up being one of the few post-HBP fictions I will end up liking. I suppose I have to wait to find out. So far, it's written well, and the whole "independent" view for Harry here appeals to me (when has it never?) I look forward to reading more. - Shain |
| Morniel 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseYou've got me hooked. Thanks for not adding Ginny. Hope you'll keep on going. You'll get a better review once I've read more, but I can say already that you thought a lot about the background information, so thumbs up! morniel |
| vivilp182 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseHey really great start! This fic seems to have interesting aspects. “Yes I can or I’ll use my bat boogey hex on you!” - Huahuahuuh! I loved this part, the only thing Ginny can do hehe! It's great that Harry isn't with her! And I loved the fact that Luna joined them, and Neville as well! You write the characters very well, much like them. Update soon please! |
| Blah 2006-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseDude your story kick **, it just became my favourite story hope you update soon. |
| HarrySlytherinson 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseplease update soon! |
| Rkhiara 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusebrilliant...hoping to read more soon! please update asap... |
| schmanski 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusei dont usually like post-hbp stories but this is good so far i hope you update soon |
| falseproffitt 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseway cool I cant wait to read many more chapters |
| Kevin-McKay 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusehmm...good start! i loved the scene with the switchblade, that was awesome! i like the idea of this story, but (as i'm sure you know) there are a few other stories out there that are like this. You will want to make sure you don't get too similar to them, though there are key parts that need to happen. hope you have fun writing this! |