Aw...poor Emeth!
He's one of my faves too.
I love this! Emeth doesn't get enough love.
-Raspberry parfait

You are really, really good at character reactions to Aslan.

I like Emeth too! Hehe! I love this fic. as well! Thanks for writing one! =) God job! God bless!

I have always liked Emeth, too. You seem to have a good grasp of his character. Would you ever be interested in writing a longer story about Emeth's childhood, and life? I would definitely read it if you did.

Great fic! Short, but great! Well, I see that you're a big fan of The Chronicles of Narnia so, if you want, read my fic "O Fim da Linhagem Real". And yes, I'm portuguese and my fic, too... :P I don't remember very well Emeth but, the story is good. And it seems that you have a good knowledge of the English language. Continue writing fics of Narnia! ;)

Oh, my gosh, that was amazing! Don't worry; you're English was very good. Just try to be more careful about run-on sentences. Other than that, there's basically no more mistakes.

You like Emeth, too? He's so wonderful, and a personal favorite of mine.

*Very* interesting. The relationship between fear and worship, Emeth's father and Tash, Aslan and ... well, everything really ... is a really intriguing concept. Well written, too -- I was absorbed. (I've always liked Emeth as well, he's a rather beautiful character.)

aww. i love emeth. :D

Very interesting. My dad is rereading The Last Battle to my siblings, and last night we covered the chapter where he dies. I want to write something for him... Poor fella. Anyway. Very good. :)

(As far as I see, there are just wo grammatical errors - it was fear THAT took him outside his HOUSE, and DEEP respect - otherwise your English is really very good.)
More importantly, yes, As minor characters go, Emeth is certainly a very important one, the scene in LB shows one of the fundamental ideas of Aslan, and you have capured his character as a child very well indeed.

Ooh, interesting. The last part was especially intriguing.

Ah, interesting little fic. I've liked Emeth from the Last Battle too. There was a few grammer errors, but the fic wasn't too bad, just short.