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JavaJunkieLL4Ever
2007-04-18 . chapter 1
I loved it. So angsty.
Lindakins
2007-04-12 . chapter 1
That just made my heart break all over again after Lorelai's perfect wedding fell apart. The musings of heartbreak and how the world goes on even when you feel like you're stuck in one place.
RecklessSummerNights
2007-02-26 . chapter 1
Amazing. I loved the repetition and the style. It captured everything I thought Lorelai would feel on that day. It was really fantastic
GGGirl
2006-07-13 . chapter 1
Awesome and so heartrending. You've got a gift, and you sure captured her emotions perfectly.

But personally, and i know I am in the minority here - I prefer Christopher *ducks*. He's just way hotter, and I think his relationship with Lorelai has more substance.

Besides which - Luke sucks. Early on I just found him gross, in spite of their connection. Now when he finally turned pretty hot - his behavior was what was revolting.

I'm ranting. Sorry. Loved your story! give us more.
Angelgirl0910
2006-05-18 . chapter 1
Wow... *mutters under breath"stupid bastard"* I like the fic, makes me even more angry at Luke. But I'm glad that you're finally gonna be updating some of your much beloved fics.
K
2006-05-03 . chapter 1
So sad, I think you captured perfectly the mood of many a Gilmore Fan as they sit and watch Luke become more and more disconnected from his fiancee.
Great job.
BehrBeMine
2006-03-03 . chapter 1
Oh, how you do make my heart hurt and cry. You keep cranking these one-parters, dear, because they're delicious. As delicious as the cake was supposed to be... Oh, where's my vintage hanky?
teabean
2006-02-22 . chapter 1
Okay, I know this story is listed as 'Complete', but come on! Can you leave us like that, just hanging there? Eventually our fingers are going to get too sore to hold onto that cliff you've left us hanging on and we're all going to plunge into the icy, cold waters of no-GG land.

Still it was beautifully written, emotive.
ms. polaris black
2006-02-22 . chapter 1
I like it...I actually loved, its a bit more realistic than what many people have written about June 3rd and the wedding to take place... I liked it...In other news...I love that you are about to update all your other stories...!! :D youre gonna make my day...
tazzded
2006-02-22 . chapter 1
Keep going. You've got me hooked.
Kylie1403
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
thats sad *cries*
abc79-de
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
Perfect.

Absolutely perfect.

When I first read this, I was enveloped into the world that is the disappointment in Lorelai's eyes every time April is mentioned, or she and Sook have a chat about wedding plans. It's written all over her face, it's impossible not to miss... Unless you name rhymes with Duke.

The pacing of this thing took my breath away. When you
Season4.5
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
Again, you render me speechless... Pardon the pun.

It's excellent, poignant, well thought of, full of expression and complete sorrow. If nothing else, June Third will remind me of days of what could've beens, what I've becomes and what I wish I am.

June third will be a reminder to take a chance and not mope because you chose to make a compromise.

Thank you for the lovely oneshot.

Love ya!
Michaela Martin
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
I really liked this story. I feel like you have tapped into Lorelai's head and pulled out her inner most thoughts and feelings. Well done.
passions-spent
2006-02-21 . chapter 1
aww this was sad but I really liked it!
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