Very, very funny--I loved it! You have a quite well-developed writing style, and this story was such a great idea on top of that. Never stop writing!

This is adorable! And probably one of the best written bits in this section.

...my brother kissed a toad once...anyway, I enjoyed this.

Oh!

'tis not many people that can capture the thoughts of a four year old!
Very good fic!

...the very last sentance is confusing though, not sure exactly what that meant.