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| FruitsMetal 2008-04-02 ch 16,  | abuseYayz~! Please update soon ^_^ |
| lydia-chan 2008-03-30 ch 16, | abusei enjoyed the chapter and i can't wait for the next one!^_^ |
| The Only Onigiri 2008-03-30 ch 16, | abuseGreat chapter! :) I really have missed this story! I do hope that you intend to keep your promise and continue this story. Now that Grandfather is dying and Tohru is cought in some net, I wonder what will happen! ^^ Please update when you can and be safe! ~The Only Onigiri |
| MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon |
| Spazzioli 2007-03-05 ch 15, | abuse*claps* Nicely done. Update soon! |
| RinHaru4ever 2007-02-15 ch 15, | abuseOh... Don't tell me that you given up on this... I love this fancfic! |
| NothingButAMemory 2006-11-14 ch 15, | abuseGomen, Sa-chan, it took me so long! But! I finally read the chapter, and I must say, I love it (Although it is sort of hard to read with Holly bugging me and having to help out with the little Frosh while they finish they're homework -- stupid aide class, with the teacher leaving us all alone with them in the library!)! Keep up the good work. Mii-chan |
| Kittysand Katie 2006-10-12 ch 15, | abuseHey! Sorry, I haven't been around! But I finally have my internet back. :) I loved this chapter for the Hatori/Mayu part! That was just really funny and cute, particularly with the buttermilk. xD |
| ana-domovoi 2006-09-25 ch 15, | abuseHello, my dearest Aria-chan!I have finally overcome my laziness and read Chapter fifteen. It was pretty good, but it could use a little bit of work. There were some things that weren't in the right tense and stuff, but we can work that out later...I like teh fluff, and I want you to write more! I'm glad you overcame your "fluff issues" and you are getting better at writing the stuff without freaking out. Please update soon, and don't worry about who's reading your story! If they aren't reading, it's just cause they don't know any better... :D |
| kingleby 2006-09-12 ch 15, | abuselol, how could i not review for momiji? ^_^ kyo captured? no! I hope he'll be okay! and the hari and mayu bit was so cute! |
| kingleby 2006-09-12 ch 14, | abusesorry i haven't reviewed till now, had troubles with the computer. yay! tohru is free! akito isn't king soon! ^_^ i NEVER expected that little twist with kyo, hee hee ^_^ love it! |
| inumatchmaker 2006-09-02 ch 15, | abuse-Gasp- Not my little cat friend! They must go to him at once xD update soon. |
| melting snowflake 2006-08-20 ch 14, | abuseOH! The chapter was great. Hatori would have to be a good artist, he is a doctor after all (Biology requires many diagrams)And seriously your writing is not going downhill it's great! You have no idea how excited I was to see that you had updated! Although people like your writing they fail to express it proplerly. Our fault completely. Update soon! (seriously, can't wait) ~Melting Snowflake |
| ana-domovoi 2006-07-16 ch 14, | abuseThe kiss! The kiss! -falls all over self- It was okay, but at least YOU actually wrote it! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! -gives hug- So, I have to ask...how many times did you get up and run outside yelling before the scene actually got written, hm? |
| Winter's Light 2006-07-15 ch 14, | abuseYAY! A nice long chapter! But... *sniff* It's over, so please update as soon as possible. |