Reviews for By the Light of the Fire, the Truth Is Known

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History Buff 1990 2007-01-04 ch 12,	abuseHey, I just found + read this story and it's going pretty well, please carry on. Just a comment on an AN you posted in an earlier chapter, IF YOU BRING BACK THE DISGRACES TO THE LEGENDARY SHOW THAT WAS CHARMED, BILLIE AND CHRISTY, I WILL DO AS MUSH BAD TO YOU STUFF AS I POSSIBLY CAN OCVER THE INTERNET. I noticed that you were also ** off about the finale, in that case I understand your reluctance to write anything more till you get your temper under control and I respect that, but please try to kick that, this story has some real potential to be one of the really great ones. I am just really worried that since you haven't updated in a while you may have forgotten it. But I should say that I am reading this at 3:03am so don't read into what I'm saying too much, although I don't feel particularly sleepy right now my brain could be really quite bad at the whole thinking thing and I just didn't notice (like I would anyway) :). Also, before I forget HAPPY (UPDATY) NEW YEAR.
Kkat84 2006-09-01 ch 12,	abuseIs there any chance you're going to continue the story anytime soon? . I miss this story. Not that I have any room to talk, considering that I just updated today.
Sky 2006-08-17 ch 12, anon.	abuseAwesome story... if you never continue, i hope you will make it an AU, without Chris traveling to the past as closing moment (too many tales like that, and I dont like the finale neither, specially because it has totally ruined the bond bt Piper and Chris...)
Princess in the Pea 2006-05-23 ch 11,	abusei thought that dani thought that chris and peter were dead. so chris and wyatt are brothers(obvious), peter and ralph are brothers, and dani and melinda are sisters, right? and who belongs to which charmed one out of the latter pair?
Caralynne 2006-05-14 ch 11, anon.	abuseHey again! So, yeah, call me Cole obsessed, but...how did he die? Please make it so that he wasn't evil when he died...I love Cole, and honestly believe that the writers killed his character by having him come back a third time and go all crazy...but who is Dani's father? the last two chapters were good, but they moved a little slow...although this could have been because they were "scene setting" chapters. I like the "alliance" thing, though, and I like how you had Melinda mentioning the thing about security, because it brought a smile to my face - I was thinking the same thing. Looking forward to the next chapter! Caralynne
Kkat84 2006-05-12 ch 11,	abuseGood chapter. Did you already tell us what happened to their mothers and I just don't remember, or is that something that will come up later? I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Kkat84 2006-05-03 ch 10,	abuseThis chapter was good; I'm looking forward to the next one. As for Billie and Christy, I would only write them in if they would contribute to the story. If you have a good plan for writing them in and you want to use them, go ahead. Otherwise, leave them out.
Matt 2006-05-03 ch 10, anon.	abusePlease, Please Do NOT include Billie and Christy!
pinkrockpunkcess 2006-05-03 ch 10,	abuseI'm not usually into the whole 'evil Wyatt future' fics but I'm really enjoying this, keep it up!
Caralynne 2006-04-22 ch 9, anon.	abuseHi again! First of all, I can guess that Melinda's father is Cole. (YES!!) But who is Dani's father? How come they have a different father, anyway? Please don't tell me that Cole wen't evil again after Mel was born...can he have died a heroic death? One thing - if Walter was evil (even somewhat), shouldn't Mel have been able to sense it? I'm really looking forward to Melinda with the council. Please continue. Caralynne PS - I'm really begging on the whole "heroic death" thing I mentioned above...
Kkat84 2006-04-22 ch 9,	abuseI can't wait to find out how that meeting will go. I can just picture Melinda clashing with the Resistance Council. She's my favorite character so far. I'm looking forward to the next update!
Kkat84 2006-04-20 ch 8,	abuseShouldn't Melinda have been able to sense that Walter is a demon? And all three sides need to work on their security-Melinda seems like the only one who's actually alert. Wyatt doesn't know that one of his people has a son, Bianca walked into Resistance headquarters, and Walter left the room without anybody noticing. Interactions between the Halliwell siblings and cousins promise to be very interesting. Please update soon.
Kkat84 2006-04-19 ch 7,	abusePretty good. I'll try to give more detailed reviews in the future, I read both of your stories in the same day and I don't have the time right now to go back and sort them out. I like both of them, though. Nice touch with Melinda working with her cousins but being the source! That's a new one. If you get the chance, check out a couple of mine.
Caralynne 2006-04-18 ch 7, anon.	abuseWell I like it - there are just a few things I would like to mention. First of all, some of the dialogue is difficult to follow, so watch your dialogue tags every now and then so it doesn't get confusing; sometimes when there's a conversation that, i.e., goes like "yes," "no," etc (you get the point), it gets confusing. Also, it is just a tad bit confusing when the characters keep switching around. It is very hard to follow who is working for who sometimes, but you only have to be a bit careful about this; it isn't a major issue. Thirdly, do you think you could make your chapters just a bit longer? ;) On a lighter note, I enjoyed the Chris/Bianca scene - are they going to get together? They better - I' m a real stickler for canon, and I like ChrisBianca stories. I think the tension you included was perfect. Lastly, what has been killing me: WHO IS MELINDA/DANIELLE'S DAD? (Is it Cole? PLEASE say yes :)) Hope I have helped, Caralynne
jodalita 2006-04-11 ch 5,	abuseGreat story about an alternate reality. That's the reality that we'll never get to see, but with your own little touches. The plot so far looks awesome and interesting, although I'm not so sure Bianca was a demon. I tought she was witch belongning to a coven called Phoenix. But well, it's your story. I also like the twists with Melinda and Paige's son. Who's the father of Melinda and Danielle, by the way? The Council members are particularly interesting. I also like the professional way you use to tell the story. I expect to read more of this very soon. Good job!

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