This is definitely the best fan story I have ever read. I cry every time I watch this movie. It took me forever to get through the entire thing because I always turned it off before Jack died, so it's nice to know someone else wanted him alive.

O_O Why is there only one chapter?

I liked it alot! Please update soon. I want to know what happens.

woot. an explaination that's plausable ^^

Really good start. I hope you continue it!

oh you must keep going. i love this so far.

Oh, my God. PLEASE keep going! You gotta update soon! This story is one of the best written in this fandom already. I can't wait to see where you go with it! Also, great title! Please don't take too long!

ooh, yeah! jack's alive! what's gonna happen? the brothers find out the hard way? oh no! write more soon, i love it so far

Story sounds like its gunna be good! can't wait for the next chapter!!