This was excellent. I truly enjoyed it.

nice nice..

Oh that story was awesome! I love it all! That was a great idea you came up with! Keep up the great work!

Man that was such a great story! Satisfying yet short and sweet at the same time. I loved it. I also really enjoyed the humor and the tender moments between the two. Thanks for writing this.

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Wow that was a really good story. I loved how you wrote Squall's mind thinking with the whole military thingy, that was funny :D
At first I thought Griever was evil and was gonna do something mean... But he didn't :D He was funny... in a weird way.
I loled when Squall thought Rinoa was pregnant XD so funny
Overall a very sweet adorable story yummies!

Very nice 'Squall and Rinoa' Fanfic. That was too good. I really liked it. When Squall thought Rinoa was pregnent, hah! That made me laugh so hard. Haha! I put it on my fave stories, keep writing fanfics. =)

i love your story i hope u do some more chapters on this one to.

hmm nicely written i really like the storyline, a little ooc but i can cope with that lol very good, keep writing! sequel?

Perfect! thats what I was looking for. omigod It was SO good. I can't believe people can write as good as you. Make a book or something please. well ME A SEQUEL DAMNIT, I MUST SEE THE REST OF THIS STORY!

I really like your story!it's very nice!and well written!

A little too awkward and lewd for me. Nevertheless, the story has ended.

Kinda suggestive.

Good job. He's alive...

Somehow I kinda knew.

Wow, such a good chapter.

Wow.

This has got to be your best chapter yet. Good job.