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| SkoomaAddict -360- 2007-06-14 ch 6,  | abuseO.O Cant wait for more!What is the plot? Like, you know. NVM... is Momo an evil agent or something? Will Murdoc understand 2D's pain? Anything else? Oh yeh, please dont abbrieviate when ppl talk again! This is a great story! Please update! |
| SkoomaAddict -360- 2007-06-14 ch 3, | abuseAll i have to say is HUH? |
| SkoomaAddict -360- 2007-06-14 ch 2, | abuseO.o Muds... what hapened to him? PLEASE dont abbrieviate (spelling) stuff when people are talking. It makes no sence. Its like they say WTF instead of What the **. See? No one will flame you for putting curse words in the story, which, by the way, is great so far! |
| SkoomaAddict -360- 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseHow could Muds do that? I mean, i can understand the accident, but laughing an doing that to Noods? You made him an **!Wa!Waht happened to his fam? |
| FLECHER - 2006-05-06 ch 6, | abuseI think you'd be okay leaving it like this.But i din't know. Wait and see what other reviewers say. |
| Noodle Tusspot 2006-03-31 ch 6, | abuseGood story you catcht he characters actions quiet well , except it seems 2D wound be fraid of a snake since Satan took the form of a snake to trick eve( correct me if i am wrong i dont study chritianity) but smashing it with tennis racket sound like fun. well i like the flashbacks a little sad but very good well keep on writing your story is so great. |
| DemPoke 2006-03-31 ch 6, | abuseWE!! Once again, great chappie! YAY! MOMO! I know two creatures that are named Momo! A big eared lemour, and a flying squirrel!! (tries to fly to top of a tree but crashes into trunk) Eheheh...(raises finger) I... Musiclover... am not part flying squirrel...(twitch)CONTINUE! |
| Glasscase of Emotions 2006-03-31 ch 6, | abuseAw...no likey the puppy. XP -TSSC |
| Glasscase of Emotions 2006-03-31 ch 5, | abuseAw...I like snakes...damn Murdoc...wth! They left him all by his lonesome?! -TSSC |
| Glasscase of Emotions 2006-03-31 ch 4, | abuseAww...that was a definite original flashback, I loved it. I've always read Stu's father as abusive or something along the lines. I like how you made it with a different twist. =D -TSSC |
| Noodle Tusspot 2006-03-17 ch 3, | abusegood story your goign on my autor alert list |
| GORILLAZLOVER 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abuseAW!! POOR NOODLE! (hugs Noodle) Normally I'd be carin bout Muds...but he was bein an ** HOLE! GR HIM! Noodle: "..." (whimpers) Poor, poor Noodle... |
| Spicer's kitten 2006-02-23 ch 3, | abuseit's cool how you typed in Japanese! I wonder what will happen next? Oh how do you pronounce Hai? (yes) |
| DemPoke 2006-02-22 ch 3, | abuseWEE! Great story... I don't like big dogs, only small ones... that don't look stupid... WE! (I say that alot) Keep goin'...PLEASE! |
| Glasscase of Emotions 2006-02-22 ch 3, | abuseXD poodles. Way rich. Wow, I almost feel bad for Muds, but...he killed a hamster, so he's a **. T_T -TSSC |