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| snowleaf 2007-04-24 ch 1,  | abuseSubtley cute (again). Lol, I like how you made them say "I'm tired" instead of I like you or I love you. It's even sweeter, like a mutual understanding. |
| Epiff Annie 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuseHoly... That was excellent. Seriously excellent. Short, sweet, and somehow VERY beautiful. I loved it. |
| HarkTisLark 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThere's no real resolution, but that's okay; since there's no need for an explanation. You've portrayed their relationship in a sweet and natural and real way. |
| neko11lover 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abusei loved this, but i didn't quite understood the ending. the 'i'm tired part'? well, nice work anyways! |
| Kapu Way 2006-10-16 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant!! Totally and absolutely brilliant!! |
| Bloo 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe ending rocked. I read both of your one-shots, and it ended so so... nicely >_ |
| YummieCreamy 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseis kinda weird, it isn't leading me to anywhere |
| sofia815 2006-03-30 ch 1, | abusei'm tired... is that a code or something? good job! |
| ilovejuice 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abusehaha cute. |
| noomma 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseThis was a well written piece that has me intrigued. I hope that you can continue with this. |
| final frost bite fantasy 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuseah...its..good but what do i know im like 12 and no one else will know i wish ya fic was longer oh ya this is not a flame |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseNice update soon! |
| UndyingMelodies (lazy 2 log... 2006-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm going to make this quick because my papers are glaring at me & saying, "REVISE ME NOW." :) I like it, it's cute, short, and very open. Ahora, I'm just wondering when are you going to finish :) your other fics, the melody one & the miranda thing. :D ~Ames [corrects her 3 papers quickly] |
| Uranaikko 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseuwah! sugoi!! fluffy! this must be a sequel xD Good job d^-^b |
| Aeris 2006-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, surprisingly it really does make sense. I was crossing my fingers just awhile back hoping a good quality RyoSaku story would be posted, I'm glad this doesn't disappoint. Please write more! |