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snowleaf
2007-04-24
ch 1,
abuseSubtley cute (again). Lol, I like how you made them say "I'm tired" instead of I like you or I love you. It's even sweeter, like a mutual understanding.
Epiff Annie
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abuseHoly...

That was excellent. Seriously excellent. Short, sweet, and somehow VERY beautiful. I loved it.
HarkTisLark
2006-11-25
ch 1,
abuseThere's no real resolution, but that's okay; since there's no need for an explanation. You've portrayed their relationship in a sweet and natural and real way.
neko11lover
2006-10-19
ch 1,
abusei loved this, but i didn't quite understood the ending. the 'i'm tired part'?

well, nice work anyways!
Kapu Way
2006-10-16
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant!!

Totally and absolutely brilliant!!
Bloo
2006-07-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe ending rocked. I read both of your one-shots, and it ended so so... nicely >_
YummieCreamy
2006-07-21
ch 1,
abuseis kinda weird, it isn't leading me to anywhere
sofia815
2006-03-30
ch 1,
abusei'm tired... is that a code or something? good job!
ilovejuice
2006-03-18
ch 1,
abusehaha cute.
noomma
2006-02-27
ch 1,
abuseThis was a well written piece that has me intrigued. I hope that you can continue with this.
final frost bite fantasy
2006-02-24
ch 1,
abuseah...its..good but what do i know im like 12 and no one else will know i wish ya fic was longer oh ya this is not a flame
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2006-02-23
ch 1,
abuseNice update soon!
UndyingMelodies (lazy 2 log...
2006-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseI'm going to make this quick because my papers are glaring at me & saying, "REVISE ME NOW." :) I like it, it's cute, short, and very open. Ahora, I'm just wondering when are you going to finish :) your other fics, the melody one & the miranda thing. :D

~Ames

[corrects her 3 papers quickly]
Uranaikko
2006-02-22
ch 1,
abuseuwah! sugoi!! fluffy! this must be a sequel xD
Good job d^-^b
Aeris
2006-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseYes, surprisingly it really does make sense. I was crossing my fingers just awhile back hoping a good quality RyoSaku story would be posted, I'm glad this doesn't disappoint. Please write more!
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