lovely read. thanks.

Oh, Ryoma. So good at sports and yet so bad at dealing with people. But I like him anyway. Cute story! :)

~Anna

>< im kindda confused.


- LitoJeLLo.x//

Subtley cute (again). Lol, I like how you made them say "I'm tired" instead of I like you or I love you. It's even sweeter, like a mutual understanding.

Holy...

That was excellent. Seriously excellent. Short, sweet, and somehow VERY beautiful. I loved it.

There's no real resolution, but that's okay; since there's no need for an explanation. You've portrayed their relationship in a sweet and natural and real way.

i loved this, but i didn't quite understood the ending. the 'i'm tired part'?

well, nice work anyways!

Brilliant!!

Totally and absolutely brilliant!!

The ending rocked. I read both of your one-shots, and it ended so so... nicely >_

is kinda weird, it isn't leading me to anywhere

i'm tired... is that a code or something? good job!

haha cute.

This was a well written piece that has me intrigued. I hope that you can continue with this.

ah...its..good but what do i know im like 12 and no one else will know i wish ya fic was longer oh ya this is not a flame

Nice update soon!