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staggered incite
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
lovely read. thanks.
Anna Nigma
2009-02-06 . chapter 1
Oh, Ryoma. So good at sports and yet so bad at dealing with people. But I like him anyway. Cute story! :)

~Anna
CelestialxChaos
2008-07-15 . chapter 1
>< im kindda confused.


- LitoJeLLo.x//
snowleaf
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
Subtley cute (again). Lol, I like how you made them say "I'm tired" instead of I like you or I love you. It's even sweeter, like a mutual understanding.
Annie Sparklecakes
2007-04-11 . chapter 1
Holy...

That was excellent. Seriously excellent. Short, sweet, and somehow VERY beautiful. I loved it.
Pontificator
2006-11-25 . chapter 1
There's no real resolution, but that's okay; since there's no need for an explanation. You've portrayed their relationship in a sweet and natural and real way.
neko11lover
2006-10-19 . chapter 1
i loved this, but i didn't quite understood the ending. the 'i'm tired part'?

well, nice work anyways!
Kapu Way
2006-10-16 . chapter 1
Brilliant!!

Totally and absolutely brilliant!!
Bloo
2006-07-29 . chapter 1
The ending rocked. I read both of your one-shots, and it ended so so... nicely >_
YummieCreamy
2006-07-21 . chapter 1
is kinda weird, it isn't leading me to anywhere
sofia815
2006-03-30 . chapter 1
i'm tired... is that a code or something? good job!
ilovejuice
2006-03-18 . chapter 1
haha cute.
noomma
2006-02-27 . chapter 1
This was a well written piece that has me intrigued. I hope that you can continue with this.
CakesNCrayons
2006-02-24 . chapter 1
ah...its..good but what do i know im like 12 and no one else will know i wish ya fic was longer oh ya this is not a flame
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2006-02-23 . chapter 1
Nice update soon!
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