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| CyborgRockStar 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, where to begin? Such a beautiful piece! You've captured Lee's voice well, and in such an awesomely-worded way. This flows so smoothly and elegantly, and it's so creative and interesting and quite plausible. The ending rocked too; it was dramatic, but not overly, though enough to make me all warm and fuzzy, haha. Seriously amazing artwork here! Thanks for sharing! God bless, and have a great day! CyborgRockStar :) |
| Isabellec 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abuseWhat a beautiful and bittersweet character piece. I think I disagree on one point though, that Lee's mother was the one who acted as the buffer between father and son. All implications in the show are that Bill and Caroline divorced when Lee and Zak were young and that it had a lot to do with Bill's distance, both emotionally and because he was away on the job. Overall, though, I appreciated that Lee has come to an understanding about his father, and they seem to be growing closer, and you've portrayed this wonderfully. My favorite line was the "pretty lie" part about the "If it were you we'd never leave" moment; I always thought Lee didn't believe him and that it wasn't really true, but it was Adama trying to express that Lee was still first in his heart. Can I just add that it's a relief to find ONE piece of frakking fanfic that isn't ALL. ABOUT. STARBUCK?! Thank you! |
| Ammonite 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseYou are amazing. Are we connected somehow with our thoughts of Lee? I am writing his childhood in "Learning to Fly," and the psychology matches your own. I would love to correspond with you about this, if you have the time. I love your writing. |
| yannik 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI absolutelly love this. It's so true, especially the part where the mother is father's XO. It's never one parent's fault (or gain) if the kid grows up to who he is. Oh! You wrote Unsung Hero too :). I think I like you. |