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| VAMPS.04 2007-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseIt's really nice; I like it. And no, it's not sappy. It's way better than any of my fics. But you should've put a spoiler alert. I think you did in the summary. I dunno. Oh well.. Just keep up the great work and keep writing RoyAi! 8D |
| winglessfairy25 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseNice Tagalog choice. it gives a more dramatic/poetic feel. though you should have provided a translation for the persons who don't know tagalog/filipino. Oh well, this is really sweet and kind of sad. i really like it. ja! Erinn~ |
| Jasane-chan 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abusewhat's up wit da weird words? |
| blaufeuer 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abusegood job. hehe love it ^_^ |
| Norn Meow 2006-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWowee! English at tagalog! Astig gawa mo! |
| gundams forever 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abusei really like this! great job! |
| shinigamivc 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseaw, so cute. I really hope this sort of thing happens... asside from the end of the series and the a few quick movie scenes the manga has more blatant Roiai so hopefully Arakawa-sensei will please us fans. XD thanks for this. |
| Flye 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseOh, I remember this one! This was the one I saw on the Royai livejournal community. [I was the anonymous reviewer by the way] I just read your reviews. Well, for those who can't understand tagalog, too bad for them, cuz it would make more sense kung nakakaintindihan sila. Hindi naman malungkot. Pero parang lonely yung overall feel. But it's still really good. Great job! |
| Sheo Darren 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAw~! Ang kyut! Natutunaw ako! *melts* Hindi naman malungkot, a! It's sweet, very sweet, the kind of sugary sweet that Vitata mob. Galeng! As usual, Eina-san, one of the best! |
| Shadow Dreamer 27 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was great! Short and sweet, I like it a lot! |
| Flava Sava 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseZOMG! This is so good! I love it! |
| I am a band geek here me ro... 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAw~~ Kawaii! What were those words in the italics? I couldn't understand, because I'm no good at anything but a few Japanese words and almost the whole English language. That I've learned. it's not too sappy. I've written much, much sappier stories. So, if you don't like sap, stay far away from my fics, the epitomes of the sappier stories. ~.' Love, HK and YK. |
| momiji-k 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThere really isn't enough to base an opinion on. What's going on? It isn't very clear. I can only assume this takes place after the last manga chapter (56) with what little clues we are given. What are the words that look like another language? Although I am sure you are going for an artistic feel, the forien language is distracting since we don't know what it means or why it's even there. It's not that this is bad... but it needs more. More explaination, more details, and a little more info about the strange language. |