This was, surprisingly, super sweet.

Good old Zaraki!

Freakin' finally, she gets some damn emotions!

Squee! This was so adorable! Excuse me, but I think I might have to fangirl you for a little bit until I calm down. But the whole Nemu/11th division friendship idea is so...sweet. I mean, I actually don't mind Mayuri, but I'd LOVE for you to do another companion piece to this one. I loved Zaraki going all defensive on Mayuri. That was cool. The idea of Zaraki seeing Nemu's swollen eye looking back at him was nice touch too.

Amulet

Wow. You're really good at doing people in character. Gah. I HATE Mayuri Not even in a "love to hate" kind of way. I just want the writer of Bleach to kill him already.

[wipes away tears] That was so beautiful, so moving, it touched me...

Aw, how sweet. Sort of.

Interesting that it was Kenpachi of all people who figured out what Mayuri was doing to poor little Nemu. I couldn't help feeling sorry for the girl in the anime. I enjoyed this interaction between Nemu and Kenpachi as he figured out what was happening to her and then started meddling Kenpachi style.

This is great. I love how they go off to play tag just leaving Mayuri punched out against a wall XD

NIce !

You did a good job !

Kenpachi/Nemu Rules ! I hope you write more about them !

This was so sweet! I love how Zaraki goes for Kurotsuchi- gotta love him, and Nemu too!

This fanfic makes me want to hug Kenpachi so tight until he can't breath anymore. _

I do like Nemu and damned Mayuri because he's always hurting her. I adore how you wrote Kenpachi's character, I mean you showed his soft side while maintaining his rough exterior.

This is really good. Loved it. Please write more.

Ja ne!

-laughs insanely- YES!

Damned Mayuri...needs to die..

Thankyou thankyou thankyou! This fic brought a big dumb goofy smile to my face.

wah so cute! i love nemu, she's one of those underappreciated characters, ne?

That was probably the best one of this little series I've read yet. It was awesome.