great story

That has got to suck. Sixteen is a really bad age for a lot of people but on a brightside she'll never have wrinkles.LOL .Stupid ,I know,but anyway great fic.

Great story and the characters held the right personalities. You did a very thorough job on the story. It would really bite to be immortal. Anyways please continue as soon as possible. Is Cassie short for Cassandra?

I love your story keep writing it.

Hmm...very interesting! A tiny bit far-fetched in places, but I like it. I look forward to seeing how this all comes out! :-)

i like it. keep up the great writing :D

OK,Ihave a question.Who is Patrick?Is that supposed to be Rick because Rick is short for Richard.Other than that not bad.

Please continue I just have to know what happens.

This is good so far. Please write more. If the magi were Seti's bodygaurds they are called Med-Jai.

Write more! Please! This is like, so good! I could hardly stop reading until i read the whole thing! Write more!

I thought it was Med-Jai, but the closed captioning on my TV said it was Magi, so I guess I'll have to check around with that one. Thank you. Hope some other people will like it.

An interesting start, if you keep going, I'll read it. BTW it's med-jai not magi. But that's not really important, good start