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| mydirt09 2008-03-21 ch 11,  | abuseI know school has been beating me to a pulp..is that the name of his real family ? |
| angelicravenx3 2008-01-23 ch 11, | abusehaha! loove this. update soon! ^^ |
| Cili Padi 2007-11-24 ch 11, anon. | abuseTHIS IS GREAT! R U GONNA MAKE MORE TIPS? THIS IS INTRESTING N GREAT! |
| Chaltab 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseSounds a bit off for Raven, but still pretty funny. One thing that would help out a lot is that Raven wouldn't swear by God, she would swear by Azar. |
| Steph 2007-10-13 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is all really well done. I like that you don't deviate very much from the show. I read through a lot of fan fics that are Raven-based where she's overly-emotional or out of character but you have skillfully avoided both of those. Good job. The chapters are hilarious and I like that it is from the perspective that she is really annoyed with the people around her instead of the "I-don't-know-what-I-would-do-without-my-friends" theme that a lot of people like to go with. I've read stories with that theme and liked them, but yours makes it funnier. Again, nice job and congrats on being the only person I know who could pull off the "menstruation" angle in an appropriate light. |
| RaiderTKD 2007-10-12 ch 11, | abuseThat was hilarious. :D I have to say all of them were pretty funny and I really think you should put up more of Raven's tips XD. Now... You have some spelling and grammar errors, but otherwise, the whole thing was pretty cool. :D |
| tofurlz 2007-10-08 ch 11, | abuseomfg funny stuff |
| StraightFromCupid 2007-09-25 ch 11, | abusehaha. love it! its kinda weird though tht raven keeps on saying she likes cy's sis...i dunno maybe it's just me. |
| RisenGrave 2007-09-25 ch 11, | abuseI'm surprised Raven gave them that long before she would have tossed them. If it was me, they would be gone the second i met Kat... sorry, Katherine. Nice chapter. Update soon! RG |
| acosta perez jose ramiro 2007-09-25 ch 11, | abuseThis was hilarious! Forget about Raven's parent; Cy is the one with a hellish family. If they reacted so badly to Raven's magic and Star's outfit, I wonder what would happen is seeing BB's powers. "AH! THE BOY IS POSSESSED! QUICK, I'LL CONTAIN HIM WHILE YOU GUYS GET AN EXORCIST!" Keep the good writing. |
| This ain't a scene 2007-09-24 ch 11, | abuseso funny. can't stop laughing! |
| titangirl797 2007-09-24 ch 11, anon. | abusei think you should do one for all of the titans =] love the story =] |
| angstar54 2007-09-24 ch 11, | abusei thought Cy's grandma was hilarious. But I thought that Kat was gonna be like Star? |
| cheekylildevil 2007-09-24 ch 11, | abusejust so you know you can't reply to rveiws in a story I'm with raven on this one- never let family members visit the t-tower great chapter Indi |
| XxNightfirexX 2007-09-24 ch 11, | abuseWow. I never really thought about what would happen if Cy's family came to visit them. I'm surprised that you didn't add something about Robin's paranioa, that would have been funny! ~XxNightfirexX |