To be honest I wasn't planning on getting into this story. But somehow I read a few lines, next thing I knew I'd reached the end of chapter 2. Well written, I couldn't help carrying on reading.
A good start, I'd like to carry on reading.

Hey, that was really sad. Poor Brad and Schul... Wonderful job on teh story though, much different route then others I have read. It was good! Good work!

This was wonderful in all of it's sadness and hoplesness. Stories where Estet/Rosenkreuz survives are rare and yours was excellent. I liked how you dealt with the consequences and the character's reactions to them.

I'm usually a fan of happy ends but this was very appropriate.