Hi!

Great story. I especially loved how you incorporated Serena's father into it. Do you think you could write a story about him and Serenity's marriage? I think it would be interesting to see how he struggles with his illness while he struggles to keep it a secret from Serenity at the same time. That would be great to see. Please consider it. I've been looking for a story centered around Serena's father forever! Thanks!

Amelie

I wouldn't mind u doing a story of when all their parents wake up!

I love this story it's brilliant!

But i definatly loved the alternate ending where everyone lives happily ever after in their silver millenium lives. the other one made me cry cause it was so sad but it turned out ok in the end.

Your a really good writer and should keep it up.

luv xennie.b

sorry i loved it not lover it lol

That was sooo good...

I think I like the first ending better but the second one was good to and i think that you should definatly do a sequel to it... very very very good i lover it!

OH MY GOD I loved the entire story beautiful simply beautiful! What a wonderful story. I simply loved the alternative ending and the epilogue wasn't bad either but with the first ending I would really love to see a sequel. You know in the present maybe find out how their parents meet up again with them. I'm sorry but this wonderful and I love Jedite he's hilarious.

*sniff* I liked the second ending better than the first! THE FIRST ONE IS TOO SAD AND DEPRESSING! But, I still cried at the end of this chapter; I always cry at weddings, even story weddings. If this was an alternate reality, then you should write a sequal for what the heck happens next! PLEASE?

excellent. i mean absolutely perfect. i love your portrayal of endymion and Serenity. Yes do a sequel! *Jedite as a perv! man that got me laughin' every time he talked! that was hilarious!*

Fab just billiant

Ding dong, the Judis is dead, the Judis is dead, the Judis is dead! Ding done the wicked Judis is deaaaaddddd! YAY!

! I know I know, I've got more to go, but this is such the best point to review! I LOVE IT SO FAR! I think I can teel what's gonna happen, but we shall see! Good!

This is such a fantastic story. I love it so much. Very inspiring and well written. Beautifully done! Kuddos to ya! _

aww the alternative ending was very cute and well written. although i have to admit...i liked the first ending better. *bows head sheepishly* sorry sorry..had to tell ya...could be like i like senera/darien's relationship compared to sere/endy and therefore LIKED the ending where they got the chance to fall in love all over again *deep breath and pause* (that was a long butt sentence) ...but heyyy itz all good... *bites lip* there were some things that i WAS gonna include in my other review but forgot...and now that i've started typing this..i forgot again *bangs head on desk* i'm just exhausted..sorry :o( buttt...hmmm...ummm wait it'll come to me...nooo...nooo...OK YAH I REMEMBER SOME THINGS! i loved the way you dealt with sere/endy's developing love...*sick off the "you love me? i love you!" "YAY!" stuff* and JEDITE IS AWESOME! omgosh...I laughed for AT LEAST 15 minutes after the pink bunny thing in chapter...hmmm..well i forgot which chapter but you know what i'm talking about. I just LOVE those telepathic links...they make for such good comedic relief! OK...i think this review is TOO LONG now so i'm gonna jet *off to bed with lizzi-poo* before she passes out. *wink* WRITE MORE! bye!

I have been sobbing for the past 5 chapters. You have a beautiful style of writing. Everytime i read the last 2 sentences of this i start crying again! i just couldn't stop reading it either. I don't think i've read a story that made the "last dance scene" come alive for me the way this did. And teh way you weaved myth and legend and history all together was wonderful. I want you to know too that if you write a sequel..i'll be the first to read it. I absolutely loved this, and i'll most likely read it again and again just to take in the love you expressed through this. Please write more and email me anything you don't post here. You are a talented author.

and now that i have been reading this for over 3 hours and offically have the worst migrane in the world from sitting in the dark looking at my laptop...i'll go night night now. DON'T EVER STOP WRITING.

Awwww...that was sooo KAWAII! That was definately a story to remember for all time! *sighs* so cute! ;P Do keep on writing! Until next time...ja ne!