This was a very well done story in my opinion, the characters were all well done without mary sues, and uh the guy mary sues? Anyways the decapitation with Irvine was freakin priceless, still reveling in the hysterics of his idiotic behavior which caused his end. Quistis being a whore was a helluva a touch too, really couldn't belive Adette's end as well it was a surprise. I have to say you can tell all the work and dedication you put in this story shows keep it up.
Signed,
V

Really like how it is going so far, wondering what the red eyes thing is about with Tessa. Hahaa can't believe Rinoa and Zell got shot in the cranium freakin sweetness and hm the GF summonings between the junctioner and Guardian is well explained and seems alot more helpful in that way as well. Figured I'd review halfway through and again at the end to tell you what I thought. Tessa's a mean bitch by the way.
Signed.
V

umb iz tessassa a leezbo cuz iff she izs den mah daadys dont wunt me ta readd dis an wy duz she hatt men my dadds dunt dey relly liky men n if teza iz a wesbio shel go 2 hecklanderland fo sho

oe meh gard, y iz evvry1 dyeing?? dats meenie an horibably! an wut iz wit all de leszbinains? ull go 2 heckles 2 fo ritinin dis! an i dunt wont u 2!

an i dunt no wuts goinin onn en dis stroriie i dont get it. n i dont liked tesidnaidfh. shes men n wil probili ty 2 keel me!

i dink u shold go 2 chuorsh mur offtin zo u dont go to hesslie.

GOD STEEL LUVEES U! NO HOMO!

What an ending. So many dead. So much depression.

Tessa didn't get the girl. Didn't get recognized for her accomplishments. Man, just a sad MC.

And I really hope you continue with her appreciation of the members of her sex. By which I mean that she better stay a lesbian.

Anyway...this fic and "Frozen", are my favorite FF stories ever. Nice effin job.

You killed her...I can't believe it. I just can't. It was the best part of the story. Jesus effin` christ. Why, oh why...

Anyway...now to finish reading this...

i cant believe you killed adette... :(

damn i was really hoping for quistis and fujin

so far its good but your putting in way too much detail. its unnecessary to write out all the motions of opening and closing jars and extending fingers and the like. im not flaming you, just giving you a bit of advice. :) just a reference for your future works. on to reading

“I’m Antessence Matleo, Queen of the Universe,” she responded sarcastically. “Now I demand you worship me.” LOL pwnage!! great story,although im not really in to horror...

Yay! I finally finished reading this! The ending really peaked my interest, and I'm certanily glad that there is a sequel. Heh, Tessa and pregnancy is going to mean hell for everyone and everything. I shudder upon thinking about it.
This whole fic is one of the most greatest pieces of work I have ever read. Your talent for writing astounds me. Seriously, do you have a few books published? I'm always up for a good read when the internet is unavailable.
Oh, and then you just had to include that compliment. You flatter me way too much. And what's with this "I'm not worthy" line? You certainly are worthy! I should be the one on my hands and knees kissing your feet!
Well, I'm gonna read your other fics now. Hopefully I'll stop blushing like some oversensitive school world soon.

Hi, I haven't reviewed in a while, but I have been reading. I have to say, this is one of my favourite stories on here, and I'm definetly looking forward to the sequel ^_^

Great way to end the story, I cant wait to find out what happens in the sequel, good work!

Well, I definately want to read the sequel. I want to find out what happens to all the survivors.

What a way to end a story! A great fic full of devastation, surprise to no end, and all the action one could ask for in a brilliant plot. Definitely looking forward to Redemption.
Oh, and in the other chapter when you cut Irvine's head off-priceless. My mouth formed an "o" and I had to reread that passage a few times.
"Only the sane question their sanity."
Guess that means Cami's in the clear XD

ooh, i know what part you are talking about. in the actual movie (i have it lol), the heroes are at a gas pump near a building. while some of the characters go and look around the place (there is a building near-by and a barn of some sort), the guy who was pumping the gas into the helicoptor didn't notice the zombie walking up. the other characters have to fight for their lives, and after they finish, they go back to the helicoptor and see the zombie sneaking up on the other man. the zombie pushes some wooden boxes and they fall, so the guy at the helicoptor hears them falling. he draws his gun and almost shoots, but the top of the zombies' head (the crown area, above the forehead) gets sliced off and he still has most or half of his face. thought i'd share that little bit of info hehe.

Whoa. I think I'm scared now.