This fic has potential- the songs chosen can mesh well if handled properly. However, I think there needs to be more fleshing out in between song quotes, otherwise it just comes off as a string of lyrics and some character names. If it was intended as humor, the writing was well enough, but there didn't really seem to be any substance to the piece.

That's funny! Keep writting, I really like your story! *Poor Kobayashi!*

wahahaha.. .ahahahahaaaaaaa...(silence)

Good job! Loved it! It's pretty good for a song, actually. Especially the little take, "I'm too sexy for my shirt." _ I crack up at junk like that. So, really... if you ever want to go into coreographing or making music videos or something, go ahead and do that because I loved your peiece of CRAP! _ (you know I'm just kidding about the crap part, right? Good... I think)

-Lace

this fic sucks!

Gosh ! Whta kind of fanfic is that ? I just know exactly one song from n'sync. Crazy little Fic !

All I can say is BAKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Nice job, Lady

you... make this? with... the other demon clan...? ... right? ... oh my goat...

HAHAHA! I love this! The idea of mix and match songfic went perfect with the plot! Very cool and very unique!

cute