A bit dark but still an exiting story. Spot on.

The fights in this fic were bad, G. You really show how Shampoo's a badass fighter.

good

well written, and interesting++

I was pretty saddened when Quantum Destinies just up and dissappeared from it's original location. Any ideas where it is now? Is it dead? Moved? Please, please let me know.

Excellent start, but we've come to expect as much from you, ne? I'm not a great Shampoo fan, but you've made this compelling enough to keep my interest.

W.

Although a little bit too dark for my taste, this is undeniably well written. I’m impressed how you managed to bring your characters to life and make me ‘care’ about them, especially considering that you used mostly original characters.

While this fic captivated me I doubt I will read the follow up, with it being darker than this one.

Anyhow, this is (IMO) one of the best fics on the site.
Great work.