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nimra 2008-09-20 ch 19, anon.	abuseomgshh your story is absooluttley wonderfull..i only hope it is a happy ending..lol..i lovedd ur stoorryy soo mucchh..i hope you update soon because this story is quite somethinngg..anywayz i can't wait for the next chapter!
hotchocolate7903 2008-09-05 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely love this story? Ever think about becoming a real live author? cos this would probably be the perfect oppurtunity. I started the story today and finished it today, and now i'm so eager for the update that i can hardly stay calm. I was reading it, and then suddenly it was all done... You must update quickly!! (with cherry on top). I can't wait to see what happens, it's just so exciting? I have one question though. In the middle/beginning of the story, when all the girls and the prince were walking into town, Derek, Ana, and Cecilia were in the front because they were crown prince/princesses... but then it shows that Ana has an older brother already ruling Spainne... Anyways, keep up the good work, and i absolutely can't wait till u update!! ~Maryam
Raenad 2008-09-05 ch 19,	abuseCan't wait for the next chapter!
Raenad 2008-09-05 ch 17,	abuseSigh and Swoon This was gorgeous! I loved this chapter, even though it's so so sad. I love these characters. How heartbreaking for them! You're such a good writer - I can't wait to read the scene where he rescues his damsel in distress. :D
Raenad 2008-09-05 ch 16,	abuseI'm finally reviewing! This is such a wonderful story! BTW, I prefer imagination over paragraphs and paragraphs of details. I've noticed my eyes tend to glaze over when I read all the details and then I don't remember what I've read. :) I prefer to use my imagination. I love this chapter. It's good to get a back story to Adrian. I'm a little more sympathetic to him now. Just like Derek, he can't help what he is. I can't wait to see what happens next. BTW, the kiss was perfect. Very well done. I had to read that twice. :)
SuprSmartChic 2008-09-02 ch 19,	abuseUpdate soon! I love the story! it's really original. And i love all the twists you keep adding.
Forever Daydreaming 2008-08-30 ch 19,	abuseWow... this is really good. I thought it was really interesting how you described Adrian as light and Derek as dark, when it seems to actually be the other way around. At the moment, I am not liking Cesario at all. Nice touch, naming all the Itallien king and his advisors after Shakespear's characters.
FaerieatHeart13 2008-08-20 ch 19,	abuseI did like the bit you added on to the end of chapter 18. It really helped to flesh out the story. I know it's hard to get chapters done and posted. I'm a horrible example. You could try to add a bit more detail about the surroundings and maybe throw Lord Adrian in there. What man wouldn't want to see his fiance? I think Adrian is a possessive enough man to want to exert his power a bit over Cecilia. I wait to see how the rest of the story enfolds. Till then...
Desepere Romantique 2008-08-19 ch 19,	abusesuch a good chapter! gosh, i missed this so much. please don't wait another six months to update... let alone one month! (for me?) i can't wait to see Cecilia and Derek reunited.
loveable-spazz 2008-08-16 ch 19,	abuseFINALLY. gah...ONE MONTH?!?! that was 30 days of horrible torture X.x write fast!! in fact, you shouldn't be reading this review...YOU SHOULD BE WRITING! AND i'm willing to attack you with a virtural tomato. i'm serious.
random2one 2008-08-15 ch 19,	abuseWow! Ur story just keeps getting better and better! I can't wait to read more of it!
books4evah 2008-08-15 ch 19,	abuseGeez... could the plot get much thicker now? This is really turning out to be a great story! You might possibly be able to get it published, actually... Update soon!
cinnamon-sg 2008-08-15 ch 19,	abuseWhoho! I love it! Great job and update!
laurashrub 2008-08-15 ch 19,	abuseThis is brilliant. Cecilia's father really has lost all common sense. He used to be as sane as his daughter! I'm so glad Ana is still around. And I'm impressed by the sheer sneakiness of the pair of them. But what exactly is Cecilia's sister doing while all of this is happening?
ZKS 2008-08-15 ch 19,	abuseBatB has always been my favorite fairy tale. Your rendition is certainly a fresh veiw on it. The depth of characterization is really good, as are your protagonists. I like how you've added the Enchantress to your story. It explains more clearly why the curse was started, and also why no one really was aware of it. Making her brother involved adds a whole new element that find extremely interesting. I look forward to more updates, and I'm adding you to my alert and favs! Thanks for a REALLY good read!

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