nice...that was a great chapter!!

Nice job!! Another great poem. You cease to amaze me.

Great poem. I like how you managed to describe all aspects of him, not just focussing on one xD

You're so great at this..I'm working on my new poem for a deeper understadning. Please read my latest updates.lols...update on these poems!

I really like this one... It's so god! Please, update! By the way, it's one of the few poems that I like.

good poem, keep going!

Yay! I've been waiting for another chapter! Good job.

I love Mithros poem, with its kind of wild drumming beat, but I think the Godessess's poem is slightly too long. Other than that, this is a fantastic peice. Keep up the good work!

bravo! who's up next?!?!

Oh. I have some strange obsession with the Gods. In fact, I have taken to saying "Great Mother Goddes" "Mithros" or, at times "Mithros, Mynoss and Shakith" How crazy am I?

Neato!! ^_^

YAY!

o i like it! and i love this idea! keep it up!

I thought this was good, particularly some of the word choice you made and your use of alliteration. I have a one suggestion; one is to decide if you are going to give the poem rhythm or just go freestyle. Some of your lines maintain a rhythm, but others do not and that can make it hard to read. Am looking forward to more.

Wow, that sounds like those songs they come up with and sing about, like the ones about legends, but the Goddess isn't a legend... Yeah, great job!