 Gabby-Chwan 2008-06-29 . chapter 1THIs IS SO FREAKING CUTE!
*FAVING LIKE CRAZY!* |
 MissGreenpeace 2008-06-27 . chapter 1*cheering loudly* yay for kazuha-heiji goodness! oh that was absolutely wonderful! i can't stop smiling right now :D. it was very good. you described them perfectly, totally in character, and all. i think it really is hilarious about that first part, about baby kazuha and baby heiji's love at first sight lol ^^. and i actually laugh at heiji's proposal. it sounded exactly like what heiji would say. wonderful, wonderful. i totally love it. please write more (of them), i'd love to read more of your work ^^ |
 no one important 2008-01-07 . chapter 1 the part with shinichi and heiji fighting was just too damn hilarious! and this story matched the characters quite well, so i'm really, really, REALLY impressed! i absolutely love it! |
 Rei Sabere 2007-11-02 . chapter 1beautiful. absoloutely beautiful.totally speechless. i loved every moment and every word of it. :) |
 Paper Dreams, Paper Hearts 2007-08-14 . chapter 1 aww that was AWESOME! I really loved how you ended it. |
 Ayumi Uchiha 2007-08-09 . chapter 1Yes. They really ARE destined to be together forever. ^.^ |
 Viridian 2007-04-27 . chapter 1What an absolutely beautiful story! I loved reading every line of it. I'm just in awe of how poignantly and poetically you convey their thoughts and feelings. Their relationship really is perfect in its imperfections. |
 Zulenha 2007-04-19 . chapter 1I'm not gonna cry, I'm not, I'm not... *locks self in wardrobe* I'm really happy I found your stories today, you know? I was seriously needing some fluff.
... Heiji can't help being stupid, can he? xD
"...but..." // "I will throw your beloved katana off Mt. Fuji. I will feed your baseball cap to the sharks. I will -" // "Dammit! All right! I'm going!"
Just... lol. xD The interaction between him and Shinichi always amuses me.
And the proposal scene was so awkward it was brilliant! /o/ |
 Outsane 2006-08-14 . chapter 1How in the heck did you get so darn good at writing fluff?! Seriously?! Is there some workshop you took or something? Because this is ADORABLE! |
 StarFire and Sakura 2006-07-25 . chapter 1"It's not like it's a surprise, really. There's been a pool going about it for years. Kuroba started it."
That line almost made me burst out in laughter... before I remembered it was 11 PM. So I had to hold it in.
Go Blazie! |
 Dark-Hooded Eriol the Magician 2006-06-02 . chapter 1i'm sorry for never EVER getting around to writing this long-overdue review~
Your story was... WOW! My goodness, it was sweet and sad and funny and it just made me think of love, love, and LOVE! ^_^ i'm so touched by heiji's reaction when kazuha said 'yes' to him... made me wish i had someone who loved me just as much as he did who would go all relieved and happy and just plain joyous... their meeting as babies were wonderfully hilarious too! it was brilliant, start until end! ^_^ A grand applause for this wonderful girl! Your story is just so sweet and happy and fluffy and downright a stroke of genius in your part!
i wonder... you just showed us thru heiji and kazuha the simple truths of love :D way to go!! ^_^
write more, please! *glomps her* |
 rashi 2006-04-19 . chapter 1VERY cute! aw, I simply love this pairing, thanks so much mor this story! |
 Throttled 2006-04-04 . chapter 1*sob* I love you, you write such beautiful stories. Kazuha and Heiji... *crys insanely* Thank you... |
 kelly 2006-02-27 . chapter 1 interesting...i always liked the heijixkazuha couple best...they're so cute, aren't they?
i like the part about the baby thing, the "love at first sight" ^^ lol |
 sapphirestars 2006-02-24 . chapter 1Hee! I loved the 'he said' 'she said' aspect of this fic! Good job, I loved it. The proposal was so like Heiji too, I started giggling just reading it. Yay, I'm so glad you wrote some more! |