Oh, wow! This is absolutely adorable. I mean, sugary sweet that it's diabetic. It's written simply (and I kind of wish that you could have written more description, but, hey, it's your story. You could write down whatever your heart desires. :) and yet there's lot a of feelings. Although, honestly, I could never imagine Heiji and Kazuha saying "I love you" to each other (okay, maybe I do at the back of my fangirling head) — but the scenes are what makes it... hmm, for the lack of an attempt explanation... natural. I dunno what I'm saying, just... nevermind. Ahaha. （ｖ） /story faved

Oh good heavens every single time I read this I melt with all the happiness and the "HEIJIxKAZUHA" all over the place - sdfkjadfhalanlbc!

I really love your stories. So in character. All the while in reading this fic, I can just imagine them. Ah, I love this OTP so much.

Thank you for a very well-written and heartwarming story!

WOW! Your writing skill is so great! I so love the story! xD

Oh my god this is so cute I mean what is this I don't even ASDFGHJKL

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Oh my God this fic is the best heiji/kazuha fic i've read in AGES. You are the awesomestbestestest writer for this couple. Thank you sooooo much for sharing and please write more! :D :D :D

THIs IS SO FREAKING CUTE!

*FAVING LIKE CRAZY!*

*cheering loudly* yay for kazuha-heiji goodness! oh that was absolutely wonderful! i can't stop smiling right now :D. it was very good. you described them perfectly, totally in character, and all. i think it really is hilarious about that first part, about baby kazuha and baby heiji's love at first sight lol . and i actually laugh at heiji's proposal. it sounded exactly like what heiji would say. wonderful, wonderful. i totally love it. please write more (of them), i'd love to read more of your work

the part with shinichi and heiji fighting was just too damn hilarious! and this story matched the characters quite well, so i'm really, really, REALLY impressed! i absolutely love it!

beautiful. absoloutely speechless. i loved every moment and every word of it. :)

aww that was AWESOME! I really loved how you ended it.

Yes. They really ARE destined to be together forever. .

What an absolutely beautiful story! I loved reading every line of it. I'm just in awe of how poignantly and poetically you convey their thoughts and feelings. Their relationship really is perfect in its imperfections.

I'm not gonna cry, I'm not, I'm not... *locks self in wardrobe* I'm really happy I found your stories today, you know? I was seriously needing some fluff.

... Heiji can't help being stupid, can he? xD

"...but..." / "I will throw your beloved katana off Mt. Fuji. I will feed your baseball cap to the sharks. I will -" / "Dammit! All right! I'm going!"

Just... lol. xD The interaction between him and Shinichi always amuses me.

And the proposal scene was so awkward it was brilliant! /o/

How in the heck did you get so darn good at writing fluff? Seriously? Is there some workshop you took or something? Because this is ADORABLE!

"It's not like it's a surprise, really. There's been a pool going about it for years. Kuroba started it."

That line almost made me burst out in laughter... before I remembered it was 11 PM. So I had to hold it in.

Go Blazie!