 Moon Bunny 5/13/01 . chapter 4 Conceriding I'm a hard core M/i fan, it is harder to please me with this kind of story, but biases left out, I do like it alot. It is done well, but a little fast. Things happen a little to quickly for my tastes, but you are doing very well. I like how it opened, everything befgore was explained easily, leaving no questions on what had been going on on B5. I also do like the other Susan, she is a good charater. KEEP WRITING! |