soon my butt! XD its been 2 years! update ; ; im suffering from neglect here! TT i am metaphorically emaciated TT but oh i so wanna see this planned out. ive never seen a story with this particular plotline before, or anything like it actually, and would love to see it finished...

what happened to 'extreme pride in your work'? ; ;

wow. that was a really nice beginning. :O that was just... 'cool'.

you said you'd have it done soon...*points at the date* it's been a year! i want to read why theres a chibi albel...*pouting*

DX *kicks you for not updating* MUST READ MORE!(btw, awesome fanfic, bad place and time to put a cliffie)

OOH THIS IS VERY INTERESTING

CHIBI ALBEL HAHAHAH

This is interesting! Onwards to chapter ii!

Ah, I'm really sorry! I've been meaning to review for a while now but I keep forgetting. >.<

Albel would just be so cute as a kid XD and I can perfectly imagine him being the way you write him.

Anyhow! Wonderful chapter! I'm really looking forward to the next one.

Cliffie! As much as they just make me want to scream sometimes I still love them! *hugs cliffies* And they are addicting - to write and read :D

Hope we don't have to wait too long. I loved the scene there with Albel talking back to the jerk. Yup, so Albelish.

Heh heh, I can almost imagine Albel saying that, even at his age. XD Aw, he's so cute and dangerous! *huggles the little Albel*

Love the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! :D

Heh, well that was a surprise...well, not totally, since I DID read the story summary. ^_^ But it's cute, and I'm wondering where the story's going to head next...

A couple word-swaps in this one, like:
"Little contact had been made between them when departing and she would often find herself speculating as to how there lives were fairing." -- 'there' should be 'their', and 'fairing' should be 'faring'...

I liked how Albel was still mostly himself, with those insults for Nel and the man chasing him, and yet, we can see he's not grown into his full arrogance yet either, because he's mumbling apologies to some of the people he pushes past before Nel catches him...

I can't wait for the next installment! I can guess what'll probably happen next, but it'll be interesting to see if I'm anywhere near the mark... ^_^

Interesting start here...I like it. I wonder what's happening with Albel...I know he wouldn't voluntarily leave the Scourge behind like that...It would appear that the vision-segment at the beginning has something to do with his disappearance, but whether it was the result, or the cause...I guess I'll find out! ^_^

Girl, you've got potential, I can see that. =D Love your writing style, very descriptive. :) The flow of the whole thing is good, too, very nice. ^^

Oh, would you please read my fic and leave a review? Albel is in it. -^^- It's called "Hunting For His Heart." It also has an OC in it, but I garuntee(sp?) that she is not a Mary Sue!

...Mary Sues must die... [insert evil laughter here]

I really enjoyed reading this! It was nicely written and you managed to keep them both in character. The Plot is very unique as well. I look forward to an update :D

Oh My - oh my, I just can't go on with that ending... you must update ASAP. It's like Star Ocean meets the Twilight Zone - coolness. Anyway, I love the idea. He's named Albel and (is) Albel but he doesn't know her. Ah, this had gotten very good and you have me hanging. :D

very well done, caught one or two typos which you might one to fix.
firstly, "less you’re deaf as well, you brainless oaf.” " 'less' should be 'lest', and this, " short self would had passed out in the next few minutes…." should have been well, 'have' instead of 'had'.
overall, very nicely done