Haha I really liked this story!!

I have to say the lap dance was my favorite part of this fic. It's interesting reading fics from Sasuke's point of view instead of Naruto's.

I have a hard time writing Sasuke so I don't have very many NaruSasu fics yet (I've written mostly YonKaka), but I've written a couple of NaruSasu RP/Story style oneshots with a friend who writes Sasuke very well.

But your fics are giving me inspiration that I haven't had in a long time, so maybe I'll be able to break through my writers block and write something. :D

Aw really good fic!

Hm. Naruto really is that oblivious.

Great start. Emotions are pretty messy. I'm sure Sasuke is going to figure that out real soon.

I really love this story, on many levels. Fantastic job. Wish it went a bit further, but that's just me being a fangirl! Well written, in character, and one of my fav Naruto fanfics!

I love your Naruto. I mean, I really do love him, as in: in love with him. How odd, for me to be in love with some unknown writer's characterization, even if only for the hour it takes to read the story. That is a great gift that you give, thank you! I also really like your Sasuke, though he certainly is a touchy bastard isn't he? I can empathize with him, regardless. So THANK YOU for your stories.

a well rounded review should have a critique, yes? My only one is this: why are females in fanfiction so often depicted as screamy, giggly airheads who only think of their crushes, and have absolutely no sense of shame or pride as they pathetically cling to whichever poor boy is so unlucky?? Is it because that is how they are depicted in Japanese manga? (Surely that is not how girls actually behave in Japan?) I find it hard to swallow, it's as if an intense misogynist wave has infused the genre. Why, and what does mean?

Wow ... this is definitely one of the best fanfictions I've even read, and trust me I have read mountains. Way to go! ^U^

Omg... that was freakin AMAZING.
I serioulsly started to cry when Naruto was like, "No." And pushed Sasuke away... and then i cried again when he took the stuffed animal and then was like, "All right. Try that again, hot shot" (etc).(chapter 3)

that may be the best fanfic i've ever read. :]

AW GEEBUS! that was really cute, adorable and super addictive! I just loved how he got Sasuke that stuffed cat. Now we can only imagine what happens next. ^^

I liked the story! A tention between favourite boys, hesitation and romanse - TOTALLY LOVELY!A small thing can be beautiful too, you know - I have read this one more time after "Chasing Naruto", I am really impressed!

Hi.

I've read the french translation of your story made by Cerulane and I loved it. It was realy cute, funny and I love your writing style.

Thanks a lot.

This was amazingly cute. The beginning though... it was just like another fanfic that I read. I'm too lazy to find it right now, but it's almost exactly the same. The only thing that's different is how everything turned out, and the rest of the plot afterward. You write well, and I think this was really cute.

I'm tempted to ask you to write a sequel, 'cause it would be so awesome, but I think leaving it the way that you did was amazing none the less. It allows for anything to happen - I like it better that way.

so sweet

*sque* that was so sweet!! Great story plot, something I'd want to read over and over. :)
Loved it!