i like this story please continue it i think it will have an interesting ending so please continue this is my favorite manga series and you story is excellent how you caught the personality of hiruko and mizuki

I think you captured Hiruko's personality very well. Please update.

love it! plz update soon! i love hiruko!

Great job! I'm really excited to see where this is going- are you planning on updating this? I hope so. You have a very nice writing style- descriptive and holding just enough suspense, and no OOC-ness. Awesome!

Yay! Another YK fiction! Sounds great so far.

*SQUEE* YAY! Now I have a fandom buddy! :D And now I shall cackle fiendishly for dragging you into the YK fandom with me. Bwahahahahaha! XD

Go figure; your YK story already outdoes mine. Hehe. This Naoko seems quite intriguing so far! I'm curious to see why she's bothering Genseikan's mistress so much. (Gwah, I still need to find a name for that woman! Apparently she has one, but I can't find this so-called "latest" chapter that has it! *sniff*)

Anyway. I enjoyed this beginning very much! I noticed that you also moved it along quickly at the end (though you didn't rush it nearly as severely as I did, haha). I think it's not just "WGtPS" (hehe); it probably has more to do with the fact that it's a newer series with less information on the characters specifically and it makes it harder to end an "introductory" sort of chapter. But maybe I'm just spouting nonsense because I'm not much of a morning person. XD

E, I'm so very excited to see you post this! I've been so curious since you mentioned working on a YK story, and I'm QUITE happy to finally get to read it! :D Keep up the awesome work, and I look forward to reading more!