You write good BSG fics?! About Kara and Lee, my favourite couple ever (forget the naysayers, I love them together and apart)? These are fantastic and I don't say that just because you like my stories! I do mean it, you are a great writer and you seem to realy GET them.

This was original, cute, and hot. I loved Lee and Kara's characterization, though they are surprisingly open with each other and I had a tiny bit of trouble with that. Also, I think Dee would be more likely to *not* call Lee on the flirtation, and Anders would call Kara on it. Overall, well-written and probably (if I remember correctly) well in-character for the time in the series when it was written.

Thanks!

Em

I can't believe I missed this, didn't find it until today!

Great job, you nailed the personalities of all characters involved. I could easily visualize this as a an unseen scene.


Because I'm such a Helo fan though, I would have liked the story better with his appearance, perhaps at the Triad game or something...

Cool story... you capture the two of them very well...great job...is there going to be another chap or is this it? I think this fic has a lot of potential if you want to keep going with it...

Dude, I totally love this! It's insane!! U nicely capture each of them, Dee's astute observations and finite jealousy. Keep the story up, and make something happen positively for Lee and Kara, and it will totally kick **!

This too deserves a continuation, don't ya think? *winks*

Thanks.
Marilyn

I love it! specially these parts:

Lee had missed his viper so much he'd commandeered one from the Pegasus and promptly challenged Kara to fly with him. They did a series of maneuvers so deft and close it was obvious to everyone on any observation deck anywhere that they were frakking in space.

Kara wished she could shove a mirror in front of Lee's face so he'd see how he looked right then. Like a beautiful puppy, kicked in the stomach.

and the one about Anders being stupid *g* really, really good work!

Wow. That was...wow. Almost-had-to-go-take-a-cold-shower kind of good. :)

Very nice. I only wish it would happen this way, without Dee and Anders, ofcourse. Will there be more, I hope so.

I like this. Very good, and I like reading things that kind of go along with the episodes. Can't wait to read more.

O... this was really good. You should consider doing a sequel.

That was perfect abelard! I loved it - so in character for them.

I was excited - heart pounding right along with them. I loved the last couple of paragraphs too - how felt like he could be open and honest with her, no more evasion of how they felt.

I'd love to see something like this actually happen on the show. Could you let Ron Moore know how he should write the story? lol :)

Loved it! Thanks.

Very good. Captures their personalities perfectly.

Yeah. Tease, and flirtation, right. Very Starbuck/Apollo flirtation I'd say. Very physical, sensual... dangerous. Me likes that :)