Oh, wow. I almost cried. I'm a very avid fan of this pairing (DizzyxKy is fail) so I'm pretty touched deeply. Great job!

Wow, that was a pretty nice fanfic. JamxKy is a really cute pairing. You should keep writing...keep up the good work!

Very nice romace you got here, tol!

I dunno...Ky was a little OOC, or maybe it's just me. Jam was right on the dot, though. Anyway, I don't think it matters that much, as it fits the story well.

Grammar/spelling errors kept to a bare minimum, good job there. The plot is short yet sweet enough.

Nice work; keep it up! Astig!

Wai ! Guilty Gear is such a nice game! I love Ky in the game! and this is my favourite pairing! Ky and Jam! Jam was the first charcter I used. Very nice! I like the way you try to portray their firnedship, Ky's personality when he's with Jam and when he isn't.. Jam's innocence and determination of a restaurant was written well. And of course, the main ingredient to all love stories.. dense-ness. Both of them.. the 'they are friends.. she likes him, he likes her, but they think that the other party just see them as friends and good companion' kinda plot. though not very rare, but still liked it!

Gambette ne!

Bravo! Good story!

Nice job. I'm glad you wrote this. I just dont think that there are enough good fics like this around. I attempted a fic in the GG section, but I'm not sure how it turned out, so I'll take notes off your fic and see how masters do it.

heh, this was my first GG fic to read, and to be honest, it was rather enjoyable. I like it alot. Good job with this one.

Guilty Gear fic that, for once, ISN'T yaoi.

AND involves my favorite pairing in the game.

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*gets on his hands and knees and bows his head repeatedly* Thank you. Oh, Thank you, O Merciful One!_ I thought all this Sol/Ky garbage had scared away all the good authors from the GG section. Thank you for proving me wrong._

And I have to say, you managed to make a romance fic without taking away the true spirit of the game(major props!). I hope you write GG one-shots like this one.

Nice story. :)

That was so cool, it follows a great pairing but still keeps to the ideals of the Guilty Gear story, well done!

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I am stunned. Rendered to a point where I am almost dumb. This story. It's...

WAUGH!

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Sweetness! Lovely! There is hope for the loveless world after all!

*sobs*

I want to give you a hug! *hugs Syao* Simply put: wonderful!

whoa...I have never read a GG story before. I don't really have a favorite pair. It seems that they do make a good pair. I'm really glad that I read this story. Thou...I feel sorry for Jam at the end. Keep on writing.

Danny