Now on to Dumbles. Really good story so far!

I really love your story and am surprised at how few reviews you have recieved.

I hope you can find time in your schedule to finish this at some point. I can't wait to see how Voldy bites it.

Wow! What a mess!

Good stuff! That Prophecy! The problem is it was probably true but the world as they knew it or as Dumbledore knew it is the question?

Excellent. Not my usual kind of story though.

If Harry kills all those that were on his side and would be again then making DumDum confess is futile. Just destroy the entire Wizarding World.

Actually torturing Percy was a bit out there but then it was all for the 'greater good'.

That SOB! Killing Hedwig! She was completely innocent! I hope Harry puts Dumbledore under Veritaserum and makes him confess to everything he did and all that he obliviated from people's minds. There is a way to reverse obliviation by the way. I suggest they look into it!

The meddling idiot is abusing his authority alright.

Exceptionally good!

Very interesting story.. Generally a bit bloody for my tastes but worth the read.

Got to love the train rec you're setting up here. Interesting rationalization for the killing. People are being controled so they aren't really in charge so they should be killed and so the slide starts.

Awesome story. I can't wait until the sequal. I do love a good dark lord Harry story.

Very well done. You Harry - Dumbledore scene was worthy of the two giants.

Please consider completing your story. It looks like you only have a chapter or two to go, and they only count when they're marked COMPLETE.

Hi,

You have set a nice progression so far that makes the story believable.


Old-Crow