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| Vanessa 2008-06-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseOld story, but I'm glad I found it. You don't find many stories like this, you know, dealing with Dally's death, this well written. And you even took the supernatural route, which was great. Very original and I enjoyed it. Haha, I was kind of hoping Dally was going to make an appearance, you know, as a spirit or something, or something else was going to happen, like Ponyboy going back to his room to find a letter from Dally. But your awesome writing skills and ability to keep the characters in character made up for that greatly. =D |
| Greasy Gal 2008-01-21 ch 7,  | abuseWow, I've never really taken the time to read stories with more than one chapter :P It's because they're all boring and sue-ish. But this one ... was amazing :) Everything fell into place, everyone was in character, and I really liked the whole thing with the cat. It was very well thought out. As soon as I read the description for the cat ... I was like, "This sounds awful familiar." Hehe, but I really really loved it. Keep up the great work :) |
| SisterCat144 2007-06-10 ch 7, | abuseluv it! |
| Lintucuiel 2006-07-06 ch 7, | abuseWow. Great story! That was very imaginative and original! Everyone was in character perfectly...keep up the good work! |
| printandpolish 2006-06-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseToo lazy to sign in. :-) This was great. I checked it out after reading your review of my story, and I like it a lot. Stranger things have happened, eh? (Now, where's the rest of Epiphany? :-) |
| Fairlane 2006-03-17 ch 7, | abuseWhat a great story, I don't know why I never read it before. Its such an original and interesting idea and was really well thought out. I really enjoyed the narrative, the descriptions of the everyday interactions between Pony and his brother and classmates, as well as the descriptions of his emotions, were so well portrayed. Not a lot of people on here can write scenes so well, you really create a picture with your words. Ponyboy talking to the cat was awesome, I liked it a lot, I thought some of it was pretty insightful. Thanks for a great read! |
| Malik Fan 03 2006-03-13 ch 7, | abuseAww, that was so cute!! So short... but wonderful! That's interesting how Dally came back only to allow Ponyboy to get everything off his chest about him, rather than having some sort of unfinished agenda. Hmm, I hope you continue writing (esp. Outsider stuff) cause I'll be watching. ^_^ |
| alleycat 2006-03-13 ch 7, anon. | abuseyup, that was a perfect ending. where's the next one?lol |
| Scarlett7 2006-03-12 ch 7, | abuseBravo!! What a wonderful story. I truly enjoyed this. Thanks! Scarlett |
| Scarlett7 2006-03-12 ch 6, | abuseOh!! Don't stop there! Very good chapter. I love that one line- "Dally died angry that Johnny was gone- and probably feeling partly rejected that his gushing of 'we beat the socs' fell on deaf ears that terrible night." How insightful! Can't wait for more... Scarlett |
| Malik Fan 03 2006-03-12 ch 6, | abuseAhh, you're evil for cutting it off right there!! The suspense! Hm... I wonder if the cat will react to Dally or not... interesting. Can't wait for the next one! ^_^ |
| Alek Kuhn 2006-03-12 ch 6, | abuseoh! whats gonna happen? TELL ME! |
| L.lulu 2006-03-04 ch 5, | abuseAwesome chapter. I wish I had a brother like Sodapop who would believe me when I said dead people who turned into cats were talking to me. |
| Malik Fan 03 2006-03-04 ch 5, | abuseAww, brothely love. It's so like Soda to be understanding on Ponyboy. ^__^ Cute chapter! |
| Alek Kuhn 2006-03-03 ch 5, | abuseI knew it!! it does resemble Dally! coolness! update soon. |