Wow, that was amazing! Really, I liked the story really much and it was funny too!

I especially laughed at the point where Unce Iroh told Zuko that Aang was trying to rescue his bison because right when I imagined him stroking his beard you wrote that he was stroking his beard. ^^

Anyway, well done!

Jamie15

great story! i feel rlly sorry for zuko though. all his plans always fail xD

great chapter! :D

this sounds rlly good so far! it seems as the true author of avatar wrote it themselves! :D

Cool story!

Nice story. Very good. I like it.

Great story. This chapter brought back some more of the humor. I could really see the firebenders looking up and pointing at Aang when sliming liquid pulp came raining down on their heads. You should really make another story like this. Kind of like another episode really. But writing is a hard process, in the end it's up to you. I hope to see more of your writing!

Once again, wonderfull work. Not too much humor in this chapter though.Not much else to say except that I can't wait for ze finaly. :)

Teehee. Very good. I like it quite a lot.

I LIKE IT! See miy stuff!

~fireGal6~

Poor Sokka, the lightning rod of misfortune.

A well written and humorous fic! Great job!

This was an amazing story! I don't know what you were worried about. You managed to capture the soul of the show, balancing comedy, action, and social interaction perfectly. Great job, although you spelled scar scare once, but that's all.