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| chuckthegirl 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abusecute, but the ending felt rushed. i guess it was that way because of it being a one shot. but good. |
| J Daisy 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abuseYay!! A new AD story!! This was pretty good. I would have liked a little more than dialogue when Meg gets reunited with her parents, but it was fine how it was. I'm just a firm believer in silence speaks louder than words...only sometimes though, lol. The Roxanne/Meg reunion was sweet, if a little cheesy. I was so crazy over the "Best friends forever!" line, but it was nice and in character that Roxanne was nonchalantly wiping away tears. Aw. Poor Roxanne. She's awesome. The only thing I missed from this story was JJ and Beth. They're a great couple, and I always like their indivual interactions with Meg. That's my only complaint though. Three cheers for keeping the board alive! |
| girlfrommars139 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseThank you guys for the reviews! I am so glad you liked it! I think this is just going to be a oneshot though, unless I get a brilliant idea on how to continue it. I do hope to write a multiple chapter fan fic, but I am still waiting for the muse to stir me! thanks again, caiti |
| IplayedInTraffic 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's my lucky day. I check almost every day t osee if there is a new American Dreams story and this one looks like it will be great. Update SOON! |
| queenofdiamonds1 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseI love it so far, I can't wait for more. |