aw! I love your story so far!

Really good beginning, I hope you write more soon because this seems to have potential and I'd like to see where it's going.

How cute! Very very god!

prongs

I LOVE IT!

Is Dickon the father of Mary's baby? very good

very good! I like the new, grown-up Colin. Yayer!

PRongs

very sweet... but extremely short. EXTREMELY short.

Did you handwrite it? Because then I can understand. And i know taht i have done short chapters too.

but you misspelled despise. you spelled it 'dispise'. Just a note;

Prongs

looks good! *alerts*