Wah! I saw my name in the A/N: thing! Yay! And I'm so glad I found this story! I loved the way you add in other characters, too, instead of just ignoring everyone besides the main characters. Bleh, the whole 'Martel/Yuan/Kratos' thing made my brain melt, but I suppose I'll just go along with it. Yay Kratos/Yuan! And why is Presea carrying an urn around? Man, the princess is pretty lame in this story, isnt she? And where are the other characters?

Please update as soon as you can!

Wow, this is so hillarious! XD I loved both chapters so much! :D Please continue writing, this is really amusing! ^^

Awesome chapter! I love this so far^^ so many creative ideas and stuff. Hmm Zelos in a affair with Sheena and Lloyd sounds very interesting, dare I say it. and I love the KxY hints and.. the gay marriage =D!

OMFG! WRITE, NOW! *calms down* heh, LoL, it was a good fanfic, and u didnt screw up the characters, either. like, they arent out of character. keep writing! *thumbs up*

Hm... seems I've tracked you down. lol. This is a great story so far. I'm really looking forward to seeing what else is in store. Update soon, 'kay?

uncle Yuan! =3
I mean... nice story. Continue. ^^

Whe, nice start^^ Sounds GREAT so far, and it was so awesoley done. I am loving the pairings so far, and the hint of KxY in the future made me run into this story at rapid speeds. This is a great first TOS fic :) (hands you a cookie) Contiune!

Katra

Gah! I hate fanfiction!! First they take away my script format and then they don't even submit your reviews and leave no way to get back what you typed *pulls out hair* Or maybe they do and I'm just stupid...hm...well, anyway, please continue, I'd like to see where this is going!