Please put up the next chapter soon! (P.S. The story is very good keep up the good work!!)

It was good. I liked Lina's lines, they were quite witty. Waiting for next chapter.

Nice fic, great job .. please write next chapter soon!

But i have to disagree on you, even if most of the A/Z fanfics are OOC i love them, because, that's why some ppl write fanfics so they can make characters act like they want them to act... in situations i am sure you would never see them in ... ^^ ... well .. i like OOC fanfics as much as others ... while they're good of course ... like yours ... ^^

Hey!

Its been a while now since the last time I read a Zel/Amelia story and yours is totally amazing, I don’t know if your still writing it or not but well anyhow ill tell you… its totally great, its been a long time since I really like a story of Zel/Amelia and it’s a shame its not finished yet

My goodness! I wish I'd found this sooner! A most impressive start and very much in-character (With the exception of Amelia, but, as Zel say's that's NOT Amelia so it's okay) so you have succeded there.

Yes, I'm quite looking forward to reading more of this! Keep up the good work!

Sunny: the plot seems very interresting.

Alandra: but we are still wonder if that is the real Amelia or a Mazoku disguised like her. never the less this fic has promisses.

Ramon: and the plot is interresting.

Air Jay: and I wonder if there will be some hot stuff in this fic. he heh ehehehehehe

Alandra: SHUT UP AIR JAY!

Sometimes bad ideas actually turn into really grand ideas. I'll be the judge whether this is bad or not. ^_- A friend pointed this out to me a week or so ago on LJ, and I thought it was very good. It was such a nice change for Zelgadis to be the one writing to Amelia and never hearing a response. And now Amelia's not acting like herself...at least not as she did the last time everyone saw her. Curious, that.

(Ditto for the A/Z fics. I also finally started writing them myself to try and portray the characters more accurately. Best of luck to you as well!)