Okay, I read the whole thing, and I love it. But I have to put my review on this chapter because it's the first thing I've read that ever made me tear up. The inner fairy tale thing, too much. I've listened to so many young girls try to describe their insides, and I think that's what they were trying to say. Really outstanding. “Do you mind if I just… stay awhile?” The sweetest sentiment, and expressed so simply.

I've been hashing out a story of mine, and now it's obsolete. You've already expressed everything :) I'm going to have to take up quilting now.

I just found this one. So well-written! Terrific characterizations and just enough romance... Good work!

Yeah, so those last two words (of chapter 3) totally had me picturing Abby and her Game On, Boyfriend comment from West Wing. This made me wonder if you were a WW fan so I checked out your profile, and WOO HOO you are! Glad to know I'm not the only WW/CSI fan that exists.

Ultra-fabulous!!

Great fic! I loved 'playing hard to get' Sara!! I'm glad Gil finally pulled his head out of his butt, though!

that last line could have so0o many different meanings...lol...

Very nice. I'm glad you finished it.

Nicely Done!

Just read the whole thing... I loved all the descriptions the emotions going on throughout the whole thing, and using those little flashbacks was pretty cool as well. Fantastic Job!

That was really good :D.

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just like that ;)

i love it, although i would have liked some closure to the hospital thing, some type of bridge to unite with this chapter... but you did it great ;)

His ears lingered on the sound of her breathing and wondered what kind of peace he was wading through.

"You make a wonderful bedfellow"

Just so you know, I took those two sentences and made them both my ** in a rollicking menage a trois and then I bought them dinner.

"Just like that." I love it! This was a great ride-I like the touches of now and then-and the way Gris redeems himself in the end!

Good story-thanks for the smiles!

Yay! Happy ending. :) Thanks for writing this, I especially loved the last chapter. Can't wait for your next piece. :)

I hate when YTDAW is down and I miss updates like this. Impatiently waiting for more.

I'm so happy you are continuing this story I love it!