You had the good beginnings of a story here, despite the serious OOCishness of the Weasley family. But then you just sort of let it dwindle into nothingness. And last but not least, stop with the damn author's notes. They're terribly distracting and add nothing to the value of your story.

Just started reading, and I plan on continuing. I can never understand why I continually read fics that have rape in them when I honestly hate them...I must be a sucker for when they turn it around...sigh...I think I'm slightly deranged...

this is really good but i wish it was longer! good job tho!

it was a very good story in my opinion, and i really would like you to do a sequal, maybe about them getting marrien and/or having children!

OF COURSE I DIDN'T LIKE IT! POOR HARRY GOT RAPED! Though once i get past that part, yes i do like it. i love that you gave Draco that compassionate side, Harry will need someone campassionate and loving to get through what he's been put through. so i'm on to the next chapter now!

I LOVED THE WHOLE STORY! it was realy really great!

loved the story can't wait for you to write more

Umm...Pythons are NOT poisonous. They have teeth, yes, but no venom sacks. Pythons are constrictors. The bite their prey to injure it and then cruh it by wrapping around it untill it is dead. Just thought you might wand to know. Ray

I am pretty sad that you couldn't continue on with this story, and would like to request a sequel-PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE?! Or atleast another story along the lines with these two, I truly loved the way you wrote them and the magical creature that Harry becomes was wicked lovely-he becomes pretty badass too, tats and new clothes and all rawr..(yum)

I also really liked the character bashing here and there-but I sort of wished for more plot when it came to the occasional new characters-Remus, Sirius, Blaze, Cissa, etc and more story line as to why Harry was never informed and why no one ever took him out of his horrible "family's" house before Malfoy did. (Mostly I'm just looking for excuses for you to make this a longer story, but it's too late for that now-isn't it? Oh well, can't blame a fangirl for trying, eh?)

The development between the two boys was pretty killer; they both knew each other inside-out already and the whole "soulmates" thing was always there-least that's how it seemed to me...makes it seem like more than just an allure or pull to be with a mate.

Ohh, loved the lemons btw, wishing that chapter 9 had the full goodness (along with the other citrusy scenes), but FFnet kicked you off for that R rated stuff (isn't that why the fic is rated M-for Mature and therefore you can have such mature content? Gah, idk.. You should post it on that adultfanfiction site then? Cause I wanna read it :drools:)

Alrighty, I'm off now, but will be back if you ever write some more HPDM lovings.. Thanks for the awesome read-I love finding awesome new Magical Creature!Harry/Veela!Draco fics.. they just make my life <3

Cheers,
Zilander Kat

o.O oh god that has to be embarrassing

Woot! Sexy scene!! more more more!

O.o that is ** awesome!

Oo, what? What is he? I can't wait to find out. And I think the reason that only Draco can touch his wings is because he his Harry's Mate

sweet, a tat and a tongue ring, sexy

Aw, so cute, I love this story please continue