Great one-shot! you know, i could actually picture something like this happening... Voldemort seemed a bit more sane and sensible in the 7th book than i would have pictured him. Did you get that same impression? He wasn't just an evil, villainous, soul-splitting bad guy. He was an evil-mastermind with a four point plan and efficient methods... lol.

its the prequel to magpie! yay!! me likey very much

Very interesting.
I would to see this continued. Please continue this; in every Voldemort wins plot, harry is either a slave or dies. I like this idea that he had to rebuild his idea of himself. Very good job.

WHy not a Vango? I loved it.

Are you going to be continuing this fic? I really hope you do, I wanna see where it goes.