Odo review number 3 (see my review for Nimbus 1944's if confused):

Shorter than the first two, but reading it was still worth it! A quick tragic tale that I enjoyed!

"He knew he was doomed, which was true" - Ha! I find the phrase "which was true" quite funny, though I can't explain why. Something to do with irony, I think. Nice work!

Ha ha! I love this! *Which, he thought, was neat* It sounds like something drunkards would sing!

depressing...lol. Very creative, I liked it!

The rhymes work really well, as does the story.
I enjoyed this very much!

great job with this, it was such an original idea!
You handled the rhyming fantastically =]
Kudos!

-Purty

This was a wonderful version of the song. I really enjoyed it. The rhyming was great, just like the story itself.

I like your version of the rest of this song. I'd always rather wondered what it was Odo did, and I think you filled in the blank nicely.

I realize the last stanza is JK's, but the last line has always made me giggle.

hahahaha... this is so cool!! lol, I LOVE it!

this was well writen, I really enjoyed reading it and even put a little beat to it. It is pretty catchy and well thought out. wonderful job, keep it up!

~Twilight

That was such a good piece. It seems like JK Rowling wrote it, that's how good it is. You've got talent. Keep writing :)

Ha, good job with creating the rest of the song! 'Odo the Hero', I admit it is pretty catchy. 'His wand was broke clean in two and from that moment on he knew it was over' Yeah, that would definitely be the last thing I would want to happen if I was figthing that dragon...

Technically, this is not a drabble, as a drabble is only 100 words. However, it is very well written, and you put forth some interesting points/ideas, such as: "Most people eventually lower their eyes to their world and forget the wonders of the ever changing pale face above them."

In particular, I like "As he sat, watching it, he was oblivious to someone watching him. This being also loved the moon. The moon gave him power and freedom. The moon made him dangerous," showing that Fenrir (unlike the Remus we meet in POA) revels in the moon.

Lol, this is fantastically written... I wish I could write poetry like this.

Well done, definately going on my favourites.

Lol, great work, anyone who can write poetry/lyrics is amazing in my eyes.

Great work

Cuba

Bravo! Great job creating such an interesting poem telling the story of Odo. If I daresay, I feel horrible that his wand snapped in half! lol


XOXO MRs. James Harold Potter