Hello...
I came here from the Placebo Pinion from the Orion Awards Category from a mentioning at the list of Artemis Fowl stories...

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did you catch that? xD

Anywho. I just wanted to drop a line and tell you "YOU ARE A BRILLIANT WORDSMITH." That's all. :)

Thanks for sharing the story ... keep up the great work. :)

Don't tell anyone I said this ,but I LOVED this fic! All the elements were there! Amazing! Bravicima!

Wou ! I absolutetly loved it !!
But I just wanted to ask did Artemis love her. "Somethig unusual passed over his eyes.." because it looks like that to me..Am I wrong ? :)

Hmm...well...Go Arty, I guess. Good work?

Wow!! That was sweet and evil! It's nice reading a story with a different more evil view of Artemis. Great!! I love it.

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*is speechless*

My goodness... he... you... she... *tries to stop making a fool of herself*

FanTAStic! I think I just read it about four times in a row, and I'm still gaping at it. I *love* manipulative!Artemis! I think my favourite line was "He was still cold, but the chill felt so intense that it could have been flame." Or perhaps: "He was not genuine, but he was still intense." *shivers* Or... no, there's too many to chose from, and I'll end up quoting it all back at you.

Rating seems spot on, to me - I certainly wouldn't lower it, anyway, because it definitely has Adult Themes.

No concrit, just adoration. Er... keep up the good work!

That was... VERY good. One of the best A/OC oneshots that I have read. Everyone was so in character, and it was very believeable. You ought to write a long story, A/OC. Maybe where Artemis actually falls in love with someone. You might be capable of keeping him in character while doing so. Very not Mary Sue, by the way, and though I think you could have gotten away with the lower rating, I don't think the T will effect anything.

O.R.