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| Krazi3-AnimeLover 2008-02-19 ch 6, | abuselovely, update or die..lolz sike naw just update |
| anhimals 2008-02-17 ch 6, | abusei've noticed that you have stop updating this story for a while now. did you discontinue the story? |
| anhimals 2008-02-17 ch 2, | abusethat was a really cute chapter! you gave rin so much character...she is so cute! it is hard for sesshoumaru to not get attached to her! |
| The Puppeteer 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abuseOh, give me more Sess/Rin. I adored Rin in this chapter, she's playing the ultimate lolita, but at the same time the only confidant that Sess has. I'm not too fond of Sarah, but if she's part of the story, so be it. Great Chapter and I can't wait to get a Sess/Rin first kiss. Keep it coming even if it's been almost 2 years. |
| The Puppeteer 2008-01-27 ch 3, | abuseLoved it. Not much to say beyond that and I've fallen into the trap of many others, but sometimes simplicity is called for. Great chapter and I'm off to read the next. Again, don't stop writing, you're amazing. |
| The Puppeteer 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, I totally forgot I didn't review this chapter. Well I must say that was a depressing beginning, and I was so loving how lovely the initial life was. I'd like to know about these "bad people" who killed Rin's family, it just doesn't make sense. Hopefully you touch on it later in the fiction. Plus, I'm so happy Rin wasn't picked up by some crazy pedophiles or children slave traders. Ugh, some times the bright lady looks down on us mere mortals. Great start and I can't wait to read the rest. |
| The Puppeteer 2008-01-27 ch 2, | abuseHiya, when I saw your final statment in the review, you made me feel guilty. Since this story was already in progress I was going to review at the end, but sigh, you've pulled me in. In any event, this was a great opening chapter. For one of your other fics I did post that I'd like an AU fic with ingenue Rin, well you've done that. I don't know how not so ingenue Rin is toward the middle and end but I can't wait to find out. In any event, I would love to still read more Rin/Sessy fics from you in future, definitely you're one of the best if not the most skilled writer for Sess/Rin I've seen. You feed my descriptive hunger at the same time diligently keep the writers in character. Praise the lord, how many times have I sat there and tolerated an extremely OCC Sess. In any event, that is not something you're afflicted by. The opening again is fantastic and I promise, no matter how difficult to review each subsequent chapter of the story and hopefully it might talk you into coming back with some more Rin/Sess. |
| Dare9179 2007-09-27 ch 6, | abuseI love this! This is so good! Please write more if u can its been almost a year! want sesshomaru and rin at the end and probably married! good luck! |
| Kodachi Hatake 2007-08-11 ch 2, | abuseCool fic update soon! |
| Xhex 2007-07-22 ch 6, anon. | abuseI love this story and can't WAIT for an update. I love how you build the relationship without making it drag. And this last chapter was very sexy. |
| Wierdo-Lover 2007-07-02 ch 6, | abuseAw OMG i hope Sara doesn't end up liking Sesshoumaru not that it will be bad or anything. I just like you're storys they seem like it can really happen!...PLZ keep writing this story you havn't updated in like awhile on this one!... |
| Fluffy1322 2007-06-19 ch 6, | abusePLEASE update! I love this story at whole lot! :D |
| Dark Avenger 2007-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the April 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. For Sesshoumaru After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our sixth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation. And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association |
| Zara 2007-05-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis story is incredible!! Please update soon cause I'm dying to know what's next! I want Rin and Sesshie action! |
| Teela.akimako 2007-05-02 ch 6, | abuseIs there any chance left that you will continue with the story? It would be great shame because it's one of the best here :( |