That was... Amazing! Not being scarcastic don't worry.
It was simple and to the point, and it made you feel the emotion that link was feeling.
It's so sad when Sheik leaves him at that point after the water temple.
You portray very well the only game that can make a grown man cry, lol.

I like this one a lot! It's very short and to the point. And this was one of my favorite moments in all OoT. I enjoyed all the Shiek cameous, but I think this one was my favorite. I like the structure you chose, with either short statements or single words. It really helps to catch how moving that moment was, even though there was never actually very much said. And it's cool how you describe it without dialogue; you only use their feelings and observations. I think this is my favorite of the three I've read so far. Really good job!

Hey, did you know that your poem makes an hourglass shape? Or if not that, something definitely feminine. Or maybe it's a fish. Widens and narrows and widens and narrows. Very pleasing to the eyes.

I like the poem: whether the short sentences of less than 5 words is meant to suggest a break from all the stress just to enjoy the sunrise (or your sunset), who knows? The only problem I see with this thing is the title: it sounds almost comedic, so doesn't really fit the bill with the poem.

Can you actually tell whether Sheik smiles? Damn him (her) and his (her) shawl.

No. Spur of the moment? Coulda fooled me. *sarcasm* ;P
Oh, well.
LIKEY!
Who's talking? I'm guessing Link, becuz Zelda tended to leave and come back spotaneously.

Pretty good for a spur-of-the-moment idea. I like! I wanna see the next chapter of "The Legend of Zelda" soon! See ya later!

wow, that was pretty cool. nice job.