One word: beautiful.

Aww man, that was so beautiful and sad.

I love the poem! You're a very talented writer of both stories and poems.

I love Deidara, and this is such awonderful one-shot for him! Thankies for posting and writing it!

woahh!! just woah! the poem was WOAHH! XD good! you got talent!

*cries* That was so sad, when Deidara was dying, and...but it was so sweet how he kept saying "I love you," and how Sasori followed him into death. A truly beautiful story. Thank you so much for posting!

omg this is so sad and happy u made me cry ur the first person to ever make me cry when readin u r the greatest author to evr live. thank you so much 4 postin this story. i luv it.

that was so beautifull ^^ i really cried while reading it

WAH!that was very very good i cried 2 hours ( i think i lost track of time)be in peace deidara(sp?)T_T T_T T_T

So pretty. poor deidara at least sasori was with him. you did a beutiful fan fiction. though im not sure if sasori can cry or not considering he's a puppet but other than that it was well done and very touching.

Dude this is the best poem ever wow

omg this is so sad ;__; *sob*
I really, really cry q__q *sniff*
it's the sadest (?!) story i#ve ever read Q__Q
and sorry for my bad english T__T *schnief*

Angel: ...wow.

Mori: It took me a very long long long time to grasp that Dei died in this story (How refreshing ^^) I was crying through this whole thing! *sob* Thank you for being so good at this! Otherwise someone else might have gotten this idea and ripped it apart, but YOU made it perfect. *cry*

#1 beautiful poem

#2 beautiful story

#3im actualy crying

#4 u rock my world and i love you

That was...sad... But GREAT! And the poem was beautiful, too.

The poem was very nicely done ^^

Cute fic, though with some technical errors.