This is a pretty nice story so far. It's to bad it was never finished, I'm curious where it would have gone.

I hope that you will continue this. I like the Kara/Tim pairing.

This introductory chapter was well-written and intriguing.
THings I liked: Tim's deductions regarding the crime scene; Renee's joking comment about sneaking into closets with a boy; Alfred - what's not to love about Alfred; Supergirl - she's been such a poorly-used character in any of her DC incarnations, that it's fabulous to see her (potentially) teaming up with Tim on this.
Things I didn't like: Not much, really. If I was to be really nitpicky, I'd point out that the word is 'midriff' - not 'midrift'. Other than that, you've got a good thing going here. Write more, OK ?!

So far you have a good start to the story. I've always thought that there should be more stories involving Supergirl hanging out with Batman's allies. Most notably Robin and Batgirl (Cassandra Cain). A pitty Batgirl is gone in the comics. Now we will never get a girl's version of World's Finest.

Anywho... The idea of Robin and Supergirl in a romantic sense has a great deal of possibilitiy. First off, cause a human boy and super-powered alien girl will certainly raise a few eyebrows. Look at what happened with Starfire and Nightwing.

Speaking of which, I do hope you plan to touch on Supergirl's crush on Nightwing. That should add pages of humor for Tim.

Finally a bit a constructive critisim. I think you kinda rushed on a few sections of this first chapter. It doesn't hurt to go a bit more indepth, especially in the investigation. For example, Robin's meeting with Renee (a character whom I've always loved). Those scenes could have developed more, and we could have gotten a better understanding of relationships between the capes and the badges after Atkins. There could have been some good opportunity to give Renee more character developement (despite only being a minor character), with her partner Allen Crisp or even her personal life during the events of Gotham Central.

You've got a great story here. It doesn't hurt to give some more details for us.

phoenix83ad

Hey guys, thanks for the early reviews. There is a possibility for a Tim/Kara romance, but she isn't my only consideration. If you would like to know more, just ask, otherwise my lips are sealed.

very good so far, as is your "Young Knights" story.
Quick question though, will there be any romance between Robin & supergirl. Since she's appeared in the DCU...again, i've liked the idea of the two of them

This is really interesting. I don't think I've read a story with Supergirl and Robin together before, so this is a good idea :) I like your style and this looks like it'll be a great story! More soon, please!!

I think this is an excellent addition to your portfolio of fantastic tales.

Personly I like this combo a lot, Tim hasn't had a lot of luck with the fairer sex. I mean most of them end up dead, though one came back from with dead (warlock's daughter), hopefully he'll get a growth experiance out of this and have some fun too.

Keep up the great work