 TexasDreamer01 2009-04-04 . chapter 1 *snickers* so, even artemis admits -to himself, at least- that he likes holly... ;D
derek *shudders* no offense, but it's just... unnatural, in my opinion,
brittney |
 Musafreen 2008-12-20 . chapter 1Very well written, and I was always a sucker for AF school stories...in the realms of sensibility. |
 JaBoyYa 2008-04-29 . chapter 1nice |
 Professor Snaglefoompus 2008-02-16 . chapter 1I loved it, just like everyone else. Artemis Fowl and Valentine's Day is a necessarily awesome combination, and the whole Derek thing is just as good. |
 yuine 2007-12-29 . chapter 1 I loved this!
I do wish it had a continuation (very much because of how the card from a certain Derek managed to startle Arty~). I would love to read more, so please think about it, kay?
Thanks for the lovely read! xD |
 ArtyHollyFreak 2007-08-11 . chapter 1 Hilarious and philosophical. Few can pull that off. I also like the subtle A/H references. |
 Lady Charity 2007-04-21 . chapter 1lol, this is funny! Derek- What? Hehehe, wow. Dang, Arty IS handsome! muarharharhar |
 Russell Crowe 2007-01-10 . chapter 1I can see why orion chose this...it is beautiful. Good job. Only criticsm is that 'that' should be changed to 'thought' in the following sentence.
On second that, maybe that wasn’t a blessing. He felt as though his hands were going to rot simply from holding all the sugary sweetness. |
 Snorkel 2006-08-30 . chapter 1Aww, just a short story? It would be awesome if you continued with this. |
 Brizo 2006-06-12 . chapter 1I can smell a hint of Holly in the brian...he he too old heh. I still can't really think that Artemis is..um...'hot'as I quote from a classmate. Just thinking but there were some other ones..joining dots... to Holly... think of the posiblities of this as a novel length fic! I love and I hope you guys write more fic..maybe a bit more A/H?
/:/Brizo/:/ |
 Zoeteproet 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Ah, loved this chapter, are you going to write more chapters? |
 NeverEndingBliss 2006-03-01 . chapter 1Nice... I always wondered what Artemis would do on Valentines' Day. By the way, is this a one-shot? |
 surrealserpente 2006-02-28 . chapter 1Adorable! Heh, it's nice to see him in character on Valentine's day. Your Fowl fics are lots of fun. |
 bundles_o_joy 2006-02-25 . chapter 1 your writing is very classy. breezy and humorous without artemis doing anything inoordinately bizarre...very nice! please continue. |
 The Humble Mosquito 2006-02-25 . chapter 1This is actually the third time today that I've tried to review this. - My pc is being incredibly annoying.
Yesterday, I had to read some of your work for the Orion Awards judging, and I must say I was most impressed; I'm going to read some of your longer pieces, when I get around to it.
Anyway, I thought it was a shame that you hadn't updated with any new work for a while, and then bam!Today I wake up to find a new fic by you. It was a mst exciting moment in my little life.
This is wonderful, even if I didn't like it for the right reasons. I didn't laugh. But it was clever, well-written, and witty. (if not laugh-out-loud-witty)
The idea was fun, and I can associate with Artemis in it. The characterization was good and wll thought out.
I can't find many problems. - I'm a rubbish reviewer - So just write more! I think you should come over to crim and do the 12 labours, so that I'm guaranteed more of your fics.
Good job!
Mozzie. |