|Reviews for The First Time|
| Harpiebird 8/20/06 . chapter 1
Great story! I enjoyed it!
| KRiSTiNEDAHLiNG 6/4/06 . chapter 1
| twinmuse 5/3/06 . chapter 1
o...we must do more fics where he's the one at her door that morning.
Loved this one.
Colly E. of twin*muse
| Imzadi 2/28/06 . chapter 1
Nicely written and an interesting concept. Very nice.
| Melissa Maria Cullen 2/26/06 . chapter 1
i loved it, even though its DuVe. you are an amazing writer!