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Reviews for: First Steps
Ruiizu1990
2008-02-09 . chapter 8
Ohmigosh, I have been searching everywhere for a DOTR fic! You captured everyone's personalities very well (I especially liked Sub-zero). I hope you write more DOTR fics.
Lilandriel
2006-05-21 . chapter 8
brilliant! fantastic story:)
Ghost Zero
2006-03-28 . chapter 8
Great conclusion to a great story. Can't wait to see more DOTR stories from you.
Oracle Thunder
2006-03-28 . chapter 8
Oh boy. This was so funny. I loved it. Did I put it on my favorites yet? If not I will. Thanks.
Was that last line a hint at a sequel or are you just teasing me?
Oracle Thunder
2006-03-18 . chapter 7
Very funny. Nice to see Jax has some money grabbing without 'ghettoizing' him into a drug dealer or something. Nice touch with Gemini too.
Ghost Zero
2006-03-15 . chapter 7
Another good chapter. Only thing is I think Gemini is a girl, but other than that good.
Oracle Thunder
2006-03-11 . chapter 6
Oh my god this was so cute. I loved it. Thank you so much for not only writing a scene I've long thought of but also for the jokes. They cheered me up.
Monkgangsta
2006-03-10 . chapter 1
Whoa man like your story. That was cool cartoon also I never missed an episode of that. Anyway nice one and I hope you read my story too
Ghost Zero
2006-03-10 . chapter 6
Good story. I like how you included Johnny eventhough he wasn't on the show. But if he got marked, how come Raiden didn't mark Kung Lao? And can you send me the joke from chapter 1? Update soon!
Oracle Thunder
2006-03-06 . chapter 5
Well good to hear that because I'm pretty sure Sonya would be the most abrasive of them all. Did DotR say Stryker was a farm boy? I ask because you made him pretty hick in this chapter. Liked the new Stryker idea though.
kim-chan1
2006-03-03 . chapter 1
This is really good, I'm looking forward to seeing more! I was a fan of Defenders of the Realm, so it's nice to see I wasn't the only one. :p
Oracle Thunder
2006-03-02 . chapter 4
I love how you irritated Rayden. Good job. Can't wait to see the next kombatant. Too bad Defenders of the Realm didn't have Johnny Cage. I think the combination of a god and a god like ego would've made for an interesting chapter.
Oracle Thunder
2006-02-28 . chapter 3
Oh this is so cute. All the kombatants so far are mouthy little brats. I love it.
Oh and now I'm curious, can you send the joke from chapter 1 to me?
Oracle Thunder
2006-02-25 . chapter 1
Very different from the usual fare. I'm intrigued. I can't wait to hear how Rayden knew everyone (and who is his mother?) Keep updating please.
Kitsu Kurasei
2006-02-24 . chapter 1
'Ello there Dragon, you doing good? Great! I'm keeping tabs on this, oh, and expect a PM.

Pacd du oy,

Kitsu.
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